ext_2039 ([identity profile] droolfangrrl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] roxy 2006-01-12 05:42 pm (UTC)

argh, I don't knoooooow (whines)

I think you need to establish how old they are at the start, because i was thinking he was older but now i know he's 13 it makes more sense

"Clark’s cheeks flamed red and he jerked back.” No he doesn’t! He does, but not like that!”"

I guess that line just doesn't sound quite right? oh heck we've all got our own ideas about these characters, i guess i just like 'em older ;)

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