roxy | (no subject)

I have nearly 5000 words of the next part of Brothers and Heroes. I haven't posted because I kept thinking,"Gosh, Roxy, something's not quite...umph...you know?" "I know it!" I told myself. "What is it? What's wrong with it?" "I don't know," I replied. "I just don't know."

So I printed it out and read it and guess what? Now I know!

It's shit! Yes, yes, purest crap. Well, at least I know what was bugging me about it. *beams*
Soooo...it might take a while. Bear with me. Or bare with me and make that sentence a lot more fun....

Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

Swear to god--when you read it on paper it's all "what the bloody fuck is that?" But that's good, you know? 'Cause you see things that kind of slide by on the screen. It hurts too, I think I'm gonna have to cut the porn, and you know how I love the porn. Plus, characters are having the It and they really shouldn't. I forgot how young they were. *hangs head*

//I think I'm gonna have to cut the porn,//
The heck you will!!! Does.Not.Compute.