roxy | (no subject)

I have nearly 5000 words of the next part of Brothers and Heroes. I haven't posted because I kept thinking,"Gosh, Roxy, something's not quite...umph...you know?" "I know it!" I told myself. "What is it? What's wrong with it?" "I don't know," I replied. "I just don't know."

So I printed it out and read it and guess what? Now I know!

It's shit! Yes, yes, purest crap. Well, at least I know what was bugging me about it. *beams*
Soooo...it might take a while. Bear with me. Or bare with me and make that sentence a lot more fun....