Jeez louise that was intense. Poor, poor Clark. That version of Lana was one nasty bitch. You had me cringing right along with Clark, I don't know how he can ever recover from that. The thought of him crawling into Lex's lap and shaking and sobbing was heartwrenching. Holy moley.
Lex was wonderful here. You captured his dedication to his loved ones very well and I felt his efforts were totally believable. It was also nice to see the Kents, Jonathan especially, warm up to him and learn to trust and accept him.
Oh thanks so much! This one was weird--it practically popped into my head a finished story. It just flew out of me. I don't normally give into Lana bashing either--I might make a snide remark or two, but I really treated her bad in this fic, poor thing!
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All Fall Down
Lex was wonderful here. You captured his dedication to his loved ones very well and I felt his efforts were totally believable. It was also nice to see the Kents, Jonathan especially, warm up to him and learn to trust and accept him.
Excellent fic. Now back to B&H
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