Help anyone?

[roxy]

Anyone want to check out a story for me? I need to know if the Lex in this fic (who is supposed to be sixteen) reads too old? I've had one opinion that I respect very much (even though they made me cry bitter tears, rend my garments and rub ashes on my head--you know, the usual) and their opinion was yes, he read too old.

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