Wow, a calm chapter! *iz all aghast* You feelin' okay, honey? :)
I loved this bit:
and the collar of that ancient, beat up leather coat pulled up around his faceā¦it felt right, at last
It's so right and sweet (and, yes, a wee bit painful) to imagine Sam hanging on to that brown leather Winchester coat. It is that same coat, right? *happysigh* Sentimentalists, the lot of them. . .
All the in-jokes just make this 'verse so much more real -- the cotton candy, for instance -- and the way you write them in the car is very, hrm, visceral. :) There's my big word for the day! Hee!
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I loved this bit:
and the collar of that ancient, beat up leather coat pulled up around his faceā¦it felt right, at last
It's so right and sweet (and, yes, a wee bit painful) to imagine Sam hanging on to that brown leather Winchester coat. It is that same coat, right? *happysigh* Sentimentalists, the lot of them. . .
All the in-jokes just make this 'verse so much more real -- the cotton candy, for instance -- and the way you write them in the car is very, hrm, visceral. :) There's my big word for the day! Hee!
I love your writing!!!