I love this part (well, I love the whole thing, but this one in particular made me laugh out loud):
Pat smiles at him and Dean fights returning it, scowls back. Get to work. Pat rolls his eyes and walks off.
And I love that for every time you call me on sneaking in little hints at my various boys' hurt-y pasts (Lin, Jason, Dean, etc.), you do the same! *waggles finger* You're just as cruel to your boys, if not worse sometimes. And I mean that in the best possible way, hon. XD
I tend to forget in between posts how much I dig your writing and storytelling. Part of it is due simply to the fact that you can write anything really well. The inner conflicts of the characters here are boiled down to sentences, but they encapsulate so much tension and feeling. The action is wonderful and spot-on in terms of "mirroring" the show's. God, I envy you.
Although, I'm devastated that Pat's hair had to die. *says O Gentlest heart of Jesus prayer for poor butchered locks* (And I like that you made Pat kinda, sorta Catholic. Lapsed, maybe? There're no atheists in foxholes, and all that. . . XD)
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Pat smiles at him and Dean fights returning it, scowls back. Get to work. Pat rolls his eyes and walks off.
And I love that for every time you call me on sneaking in little hints at my various boys' hurt-y pasts (Lin, Jason, Dean, etc.), you do the same! *waggles finger* You're just as cruel to your boys, if not worse sometimes. And I mean that in the best possible way, hon. XD
I tend to forget in between posts how much I dig your writing and storytelling. Part of it is due simply to the fact that you can write anything really well. The inner conflicts of the characters here are boiled down to sentences, but they encapsulate so much tension and feeling. The action is wonderful and spot-on in terms of "mirroring" the show's. God, I envy you.
Although, I'm devastated that Pat's hair had to die. *says O Gentlest heart of Jesus prayer for poor butchered locks* (And I like that you made Pat kinda, sorta Catholic. Lapsed, maybe? There're no atheists in foxholes, and all that. . . XD)
Not the end! Nooooooo! :(