roxy: (dark toy story woody)
roxy ([personal profile] roxy) wrote2013-04-28 08:49 pm

help?

Any chance I can get someone to look over my BB and let me know if it makes enough sense to qualify as my first draft? Just kind of speed-skim it? Not looking for quality or grammar, just if it's understandable despite it being terribly rough.

I'm really getting worried about this thing. I reread it but I don't know....it's better than I thought it was, though. The older bits I'd forgotten were pretty interesting. :)

warning--it's around 40,000-ish words. oy.


Got it, folks. :)

Thanks a mill, [livejournal.com profile] gingersnap1224

[identity profile] rednihilist.livejournal.com 2013-04-29 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
When do you need it read by, hon?

[identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com 2013-04-29 01:44 am (UTC)(link)
heh...Tuesday? But you know, just parts of it. *shuffles feet*

[identity profile] gingersnap1224.livejournal.com 2013-04-29 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely. I can read it tomorrow night. Send it on over if you want. I will pm you my email.

[identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com 2013-04-29 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
Great!! Thank you! I'll send it out! :)

[identity profile] firesign10.livejournal.com 2013-04-29 03:32 am (UTC)(link)
You can always hit me anytime :-)

[identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com 2013-04-29 03:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, you poor thing--big ugly story on its way! ;)