I give up.

[roxy]

Would someone want to take a look at this goddamn story and tell me if I have an end? I just can't think anymore. *weeps*

It's PWP, but the porn is very mild, and of the self-help variety.

Comments

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Really? thank god--I'd stab myself in the eye if I had to do a major re-write! Thank you, you saved me (and my eye)!

[me-ya-ri.livejournal.com]

Trust me, you don't want to do that! No major rewrites are necessary at all. Just sent the review back to you. Thanks for letting me read it for you! XD