I give up.

[roxy]

Would someone want to take a look at this goddamn story and tell me if I have an end? I just can't think anymore. *weeps*

It's PWP, but the porn is very mild, and of the self-help variety.

Comments

[me-ya-ri.livejournal.com]

Feel free to throw it my way and I'll give it a read over to see what you've got. Can't guarentee a proper beta (my grammer's not that great) but I will give you a good read.

Send it to penguincorp@msn.com

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I'll send it over!

[me-ya-ri.livejournal.com]

*Is ded*

Yup, you has an ending. *Fans self* Fwee! I like it! I'll send you more coherent comments but damn, girl, what are you stressing about???? @__@ Of course, I want sequel, but that's just because you're so good at setting this up!

Hee! Now I get to reread and comment in detail for you! Whee!!!!

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Really? thank god--I'd stab myself in the eye if I had to do a major re-write! Thank you, you saved me (and my eye)!

[me-ya-ri.livejournal.com]

Trust me, you don't want to do that! No major rewrites are necessary at all. Just sent the review back to you. Thanks for letting me read it for you! XD

[myownghost.livejournal.com]

i'd be glad to read it, roxy.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, lovey--I have a victim volunteer!

[arianstarr.livejournal.com]

Looks like you've got people already, but if you want someone to look at it tomorrow evening feel free to send it along to me. Sadly, I feel like an 80-year old because it's not even 9:30 and I am going to bed now. :D

[herohunter.livejournal.com]

Ditto.

I'm not going to bed yet, though. *iz younger than you*

*blows raspberries*

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

gah, you young whippersnappers! TCHAH! Be ashamed!! I'm ready to go all night! *hits keyboard, snores*

[herohunter.livejournal.com]

HEE! I do love you like WHOA, you know!!

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

*SHMOOOCH*
*loves you right back*

[arianstarr.livejournal.com]

LOL, now that's just mean!

[herohunter.livejournal.com]

What?? I'm at least 75, 76 EASY!

*glares at cracking joints*

Seriously, my knees crack whenever I climb steps! LOUD! They have since I was 24. I went to the doctor and you know what he said: "Hey, at least you have knees!" all cheery-like! Jerk! LOL!!

I think I'm gonna steal your Rosenowl to pet occasionally!

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

heee! thank you beloved! I appreciate your offer!

*smooooch* take your little tired self to bed--and have good dreams, sweetie!

[arianstarr.livejournal.com]

*squish* thanks love! Bed is my new best friend, lol.

[helioshyperion.livejournal.com]

In another life, I did a lot of beta reading. Should you need another set of eyes for this or for any other story you write, just sent it to ohelioshyperion@gmail.com.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I'm a terrible person to beta for (high pitched whining, dragging of the heels, pouting), but I'll remember your offer!

[selinamoonfire.livejournal.com]

If you need another set of eyes, let me know. Since we're both being tortured by the challenge, we need to stick together. LOL

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Thanks a lot--I'm good! Let me know if I can help you! *clings in support*

[selinamoonfire.livejournal.com]

Right now, I'm yelling at Clark for not being descriptive enough, except when he wants things to go porny. I need to thwap him with some K of some color and make him pay attention!

[phoenix-run.livejournal.com]

I've never ever, EVER known you to write anything but great and from what I can see you have plenty of volunteers but if you need another, I'd be happy to look at it. :-)

[phoenix-run.livejournal.com]

Whoops! Never mind, looks like you already posted it. This is what comes from going to bed early with a headache and running around till late in the afternoon the following day.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the offer though--and if you don't mind, I'll add you to my list of folks willing to help out ;)