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roxy ([personal profile] roxy) wrote2008-03-31 09:02 pm
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I give up.

Would someone want to take a look at this goddamn story and tell me if I have an end? I just can't think anymore. *weeps*

It's PWP, but the porn is very mild, and of the self-help variety.
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[identity profile] me-ya-ri.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
*Is ded*

Yup, you has an ending. *Fans self* Fwee! I like it! I'll send you more coherent comments but damn, girl, what are you stressing about???? @__@ Of course, I want sequel, but that's just because you're so good at setting this up!

Hee! Now I get to reread and comment in detail for you! Whee!!!!
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[identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
Really? thank god--I'd stab myself in the eye if I had to do a major re-write! Thank you, you saved me (and my eye)!

[identity profile] me-ya-ri.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
Trust me, you don't want to do that! No major rewrites are necessary at all. Just sent the review back to you. Thanks for letting me read it for you! XD
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