Remember when I said if I get it glaringly wrong that ya'll should just let it go? Okay, I lied, I have to know! Thank you for your comments,
mecurtin, they help a lot.
See, folks, it's okay to say, "Roxy holy shit--nonono, that's wrong!" Sure, I'll slam my head into the keyboard and scream and cry and curse and drop to the floor and whimper--but you don't have to hear it! Sure, I'll rend my garment and cry, "Oh Lord, take me now!!!" but you don't have to see the half-naked crazy woman rubbing ashes on herself.
So, please let me know when I screw up. I promise I'm pretty tough. After all, if you don't tell me who will? Besides, ya'll don't want strangers laughing and pointing at Yer Mother, do ya? But if I catch you forming a line, you're all in Trouble....