Dis Pater Jupiter

Grrrr! I'm trying to unstall this story--I've got thousands of words written, but none of them please me overmuch. I hope that posting it will help unclog it. It's stuck in my brain and fighting with this new thing that wants out, but that's another story. Heh. Get it? Another....? Yaaah, fegedaboutit.

Enjoy! please please please!

( DPJ part 17b )