Cry for help!

Is anyone interested in going over the next bit of Mariposa for me? Anyone? It's big and bloaty and needs trimming but you know how that goes, lord. Every word is a precious gem. Hah. I'm usually much better with the axe, but lately, not.
So, if anyone has the time, and the desire and the ability to ignore screaming and whining, I'd be so grateful.

eta: thank you!