help?

Any chance I can get someone to look over my BB and let me know if it makes enough sense to qualify as my first draft? Just kind of speed-skim it? Not looking for quality or grammar, just if it's understandable despite it being terribly rough.

I'm really getting worried about this thing. I reread it but I don't know....it's better than I thought it was, though. The older bits I'd forgotten were pretty interesting. :)

warning--it's around 40,000-ish words. oy.

Got it, folks. :)

Thanks a mill, gingersnap1224