The shifts are confusing, or there are too many shifts? I felt uncomfortable about the cab scene, but I wasn't sure how to clear it up. I'll work on that. Also, I thought it was pretty clear that Bruce was his age, but I'll adjust that to make it clearer. Thank you! I'm glad you like Bruce here.
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4/19/05 03:17 am (UTC)I'm glad you like Bruce here.