Lana really is so hateful and cruel in this. I sit here after reading this update a little shocked at the intensity of her hate. Your writing, as always, makes everything a worthy read. I look forward to seeing where you take this fiction. Have you decided on its length? Wondering if things will be (tragically) wrapped up in the next update, or if this is turning in to a major fiction with many parts.
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8/22/05 11:15 am (UTC)