Clark's hurting so much and has been for years. And he loves Lex--but when he feels he's been used and abused by the both of them,how is he going to act? Remember, Lex hasn't done anything in the 6 years apart to make him feel any differently. But as soon as he began to think that Lex wasn't as happy as he figured he was, Clark started to think. It can't happen over night, poor boy.
I know *winces*, but still, Lex has been abused and used sooooo much more (of course, i do not forget that he is to blame too, not being as cunning or cruel enough to deal with your MB Lucas!!) yeah, and clark *started* to think, but as soon, as Lara told him, Lex would heal, he was jumping into conclusions again.....that is soooooo getting on my already strained nerves....
and, to be honest, I want to like your Lucas, so I am all going to blame the clex, since there is hardly any fic where I can like him!!!
but to make you happy, and maybe inspire you for the next chapter (you realize, that you are writing at a lightning fast speed , right?? coz I normally do not expect more then a chapter in a month or so...I have an author, who is updating every 6 month and I am still following his fic) Here is a link for your reference: http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1YWC8C2Z1N1GF35WHXKN8PWLVZ I am planning to rec this Lucas, Lex, Clark and Adam vid much later in my sv_vids com, but its you, so consider it a special perk for being such a fabulous writer ;)
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10/17/05 10:18 am (UTC)Clark's hurting so much and has been for years. And he loves Lex--but when he feels he's been used and abused by the both of them,how is he going to act? Remember, Lex hasn't done anything in the 6 years apart to make him feel any differently. But as soon as he began to think that Lex wasn't as happy as he figured he was, Clark started to think. It can't happen over night, poor boy.
I know *winces*, but still, Lex has been abused and used sooooo much more (of course, i do not forget that he is to blame too, not being as cunning or cruel enough to deal with your MB Lucas!!)
yeah, and clark *started* to think, but as soon, as Lara told him, Lex would heal, he was jumping into conclusions again.....that is soooooo getting on my already strained nerves....
and, to be honest, I want to like your Lucas, so I am all going to blame the clex, since there is hardly any fic where I can like him!!!
but to make you happy, and maybe inspire you for the next chapter (you realize, that you are writing at a lightning fast speed , right?? coz I normally do not expect more then a chapter in a month or so...I have an author, who is updating every 6 month and I am still following his fic)
Here is a link for your reference: http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1YWC8C2Z1N1GF35WHXKN8PWLVZ
I am planning to rec this Lucas, Lex, Clark and Adam vid much later in my sv_vids com, but its you, so consider it a special perk for being such a fabulous writer ;)