What was he going to say, Oh hey Tom come on in—lubes in the side pocket? Fuck.
Um, that's what I would say, given half the chance. lol
This was a great ending. You captured the whole nervous door scene perfectly. I loved the part with Tom thinking in terms of what's done in stories and "falling onto each others lips".
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3/14/08 02:46 pm (UTC)Um, that's what I would say, given half the chance. lol
This was a great ending. You captured the whole nervous door scene perfectly. I loved the part with Tom thinking in terms of what's done in stories and "falling onto each others lips".
Just loved it.
I hope you'll do it again!!!