Really? You think so? I don't want him to sound too grown, or too young. I also didn't want them to sound like girls but...it's a balancing act that I don't always pull off. But in this bit, I didn't think I screwed up.
so, was it a particular line or the tone of it in general that made himm sound whiney?
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1/12/06 05:36 pm (UTC)so, was it a particular line or the tone of it in general that made himm sound whiney?