Linked from sv_ledger. Just finished your wonderful story. Please excuse the rambling ahead. This is awesome work! I really enjoyed it. What a delightful universe you've created! There are so many more little scenes possible. Any chance you'll be doing coda-ish snippets next? Also loved your Vic and Harry. *cuddles them* And especially Lex. My favourite was the part about Lex and the postcards. The buildup and anticipation were excellent. And then the sucker punch when the move fell through... *weeps for Lex* Damaged!Clark is intriguing but I'm still not sure what I feel about this version of Clark yet. So much darker... Really glad for the happy Clex though. I would have liked a happy ending for poor Bruce too but the contrasting resolution was a powerful end. It's been a pleasure reading your work. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
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5/16/06 07:05 pm (UTC)This is awesome work! I really enjoyed it. What a delightful universe you've created! There are so many more little scenes possible. Any chance you'll be doing coda-ish snippets next?
Also loved your Vic and Harry. *cuddles them* And especially Lex. My favourite was the part about Lex and the postcards. The buildup and anticipation were excellent. And then the sucker punch when the move fell through... *weeps for Lex*
Damaged!Clark is intriguing but I'm still not sure what I feel about this version of Clark yet. So much darker... Really glad for the happy Clex though. I would have liked a happy ending for poor Bruce too but the contrasting resolution was a powerful end.
It's been a pleasure reading your work. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.