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6/1/06 12:57 am (UTC)
Jeez, nothing in Clark's life is ever easy, is it? First time with Lex and he leaks all over the place.

Hopefully Ripley will be along soon and they can move on.

The visual, and cut-off dialogue, of Clark yanking Lex by the tie is *priceless*. *snorts*

Couple punctuation things:
"Lex’s scent was suddenly overpowering, it made Clark groan into Lex’s mouth."

That should be a semi-colon, or there should be a "so" before the overpowering.

"at the top of it’s class."

Should be its. And I loved that line, too, about horrible graduating at the top of its class.

:)
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