Lex’s scent was suddenly overpowering, it made Clark groan into Lex’s mouth.
at the top of it’s class.
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6/1/06 12:57 am (UTC)Hopefully Ripley will be along soon and they can move on.
The visual, and cut-off dialogue, of Clark yanking Lex by the tie is *priceless*. *snorts*
Couple punctuation things:
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That should be a semi-colon, or there should be a "so" before the overpowering.
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Should be its. And I loved that line, too, about horrible graduating at the top of its class.
:)