Though there's a lot to be said for instant gratification (ie: complete stories or long updates to WIPs), I think your pace with this story is just right. You fill each part with so much, in relatively few words, that I need time to think about it and pick at the details.
I am really worried about Clark and his headaches. I love the friendship between Pete and Clark. Hopefully at least some answers next part? Please!? *gives pittiful imitation of Clark's puppy-pout*
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10/29/06 04:39 am (UTC)I am really worried about Clark and his headaches. I love the friendship between Pete and Clark. Hopefully at least some answers next part? Please!? *gives pittiful imitation of Clark's puppy-pout*