Huh! I should probably come back when I have something to say other than 'holy shit' because that's about the sum of it right now.
I love the whole stop and start feel to this, they way the sentence structure begins to build momentum and then suddenly stops. It follows Dean's thoughts perfectly and reads almost like Dean's taking you along with him, and helping the reading understand where his head is at, what he's going through.
Eh, seems like I had more to say after all. And yeah, I love this :)
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4/13/07 10:07 pm (UTC)I love the whole stop and start feel to this, they way the sentence structure begins to build momentum and then suddenly stops. It follows Dean's thoughts perfectly and reads almost like Dean's taking you along with him, and helping the reading understand where his head is at, what he's going through.
Eh, seems like I had more to say after all. And yeah, I love this :)