I LOVE all the twists and turns you took me on in this chapter. Not catching on that 'Liam'/Lex's blind-date was a guy until you gave the reveal was ab-so-tiv-i-ly perfect.
Having the dream-rape that never happened open in Liam's dreamscape and end with us coming awake from Clark's POV was a hell of a punch - in ther soul. That'll stay with me - great stuff, hon.
Also - the longing on both their parts for what never came to be, Clark's fading and rapidly dying away compulsion to call Lois, the love the guys still obviously carry under all the anger...
I could go on and on, but I am so hooked. Unlike Al and Miles, please tell me you have a destination in mind. I love where I think it's going and I'm adoring the unexpected places I didn't see you set up yet.
Dayum, this is good, Roxie.
I truly look forward to more, barely etched out LJ time for me notwithstanding! *groan!*
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6/20/07 02:47 am (UTC)Having the dream-rape that never happened open in Liam's dreamscape and end with us coming awake from Clark's POV was a hell of a punch - in ther soul. That'll stay with me - great stuff, hon.
Also - the longing on both their parts for what never came to be, Clark's fading and rapidly dying away compulsion to call Lois, the love the guys still obviously carry under all the anger...
I could go on and on, but I am so hooked. Unlike Al and Miles, please tell me you have a destination in mind. I love where I think it's going and I'm adoring the unexpected places I didn't see you set up yet.
Dayum, this is good, Roxie.
I truly look forward to more, barely etched out LJ time for me notwithstanding! *groan!*
*snugsyoutight!*