How do you keep it up? The incident with Anna taking advantage of Kal kind of annoyed me; but when you had him confirm that yes-she did help him decide that in fact he was very gay...that made it better-I just wish more people caught her in that position-manager/boss and all-that's sexual harassment. And the Ernest incident__that has got to win an award somewhere. It was remarkably funny and witty and etc...You should post those paragraphs around. The Whit having pics of Kal didn't happen. As soon as he came into the barn-Kal was already awake_they had sex, they floated, Kal ran__he did not come back so Whit could not have those pics. But you should have had Kal come back so he could have taken those pics and you could have written more hot whitney loves Kal porn. You had Kal and the AI talking about going back because of meteor mutants as an excuse and the kents weren't afraid or mad-but then you had Kal run to Metropolis-forgot to ask about that. I'm glad this is going to be a good lex and not an evil lex. It would be nice to reunite Kal and the Kents-he needs that family love==maybe then he'd stop giving sex favors to all his coffee shop friends in search of comfort/connection/belonging. And it's pretty obvious that Lex is gonna find him at the coffee shop or maybe be saved by him-or maybe just save him from having hot coffee spilt on his lap. Oh, Oh, Oh, you brought Whit back here and it reminded me of the last time he was in a chap--the vibrating tongue--marvelous. I normally don't leave this many reviews--but your stories-your ability to tell a story (even if i don't like the character or topic) is truly a gift. It's a joy to read---so for some of the people that didn't bother telling you==i'll tell you a few extra times today. So Lex is gonna have to go back to his regular coffee shop when he gets back to metropolis-cause he always does. Now Kal works there. It would be great if the line went out the door and Lex had to wait-because the coffee shop suddenly has like tripled business and has repeat customers on same day because of all the customers lovin' Kal. You did have Kal see Lex in the street at the fire though- I was surprised you didn't have him follow or approach Lex-because he is so reckless like that. Like using superspeed in front of people in the middle of the day.
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6/2/09 06:08 pm (UTC)The Whit having pics of Kal didn't happen. As soon as he came into the barn-Kal was already awake_they had sex, they floated, Kal ran__he did not come back so Whit could not have those pics. But you should have had Kal come back so he could have taken those pics and you could have written more hot whitney loves Kal porn. You had Kal and the AI talking about going back because of meteor mutants as an excuse and the kents weren't afraid or mad-but then you had Kal run to Metropolis-forgot to ask about that. I'm glad this is going to be a good lex and not an evil lex. It would be nice to reunite Kal and the Kents-he needs that family love==maybe then he'd stop giving sex favors to all his coffee shop friends in search of comfort/connection/belonging. And it's pretty obvious that Lex is gonna find him at the coffee shop or maybe be saved by him-or maybe just save him from having hot coffee spilt on his lap. Oh, Oh, Oh, you brought Whit back here and it reminded me of the last time he was in a chap--the vibrating tongue--marvelous. I normally don't leave this many reviews--but your stories-your ability to tell a story (even if i don't like the character or topic) is truly a gift. It's a joy to read---so for some of the people that didn't bother telling you==i'll tell you a few extra times today. So Lex is gonna have to go back to his regular coffee shop when he gets back to metropolis-cause he always does. Now Kal works there. It would be great if the line went out the door and Lex had to wait-because the coffee shop suddenly has like tripled business and has repeat customers on same day because of all the customers lovin' Kal. You did have Kal see Lex in the street at the fire though- I was surprised you didn't have him follow or approach Lex-because he is so reckless like that. Like using superspeed in front of people in the middle of the day.