Help anyone?

[roxy]

Anyone want to check out a story for me? I need to know if the Lex in this fic (who is supposed to be sixteen) reads too old? I've had one opinion that I respect very much (even though they made me cry bitter tears, rend my garments and rub ashes on my head--you know, the usual) and their opinion was yes, he read too old.

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[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

fantastic! Where should I send it?

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Well, really, I just want to know if he sounds too old, which I'm suspecting that he does. It's very short( I know it!! Me!)

Because of his age, natch, underage sex, implied incest but if you blink, you'll miss it. :)

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Sent it, thanks so very much!!

[helioshyperion.livejournal.com]

If you need another opinion, ohelioshyperion@gmail.com.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much lovey, justforpsite has already beaten it into submission for me! It's done like a done thing is done! Thanks for offering, though--*shmooch*!

Edmund thanks you too. :)