Roxy - I really enjoyed this story! It had a bunch of little twists and turns that kept my interest peaked and moved along at nice pace. And can I tell you how I love the idea of Lex with hickeys down to his ass? Guh!! And Jealous!Clark? Double Guh!!
I think most especially, that I enjoyed the way your dialog flows. Even in the fight scenes, or especially in the fights, everyone sounds so in character and natural. Not too pre-thought out.
I just wish the story had lasted until Lex taught Clark about fingering. Mmmm... porn! So glad I found your journal! Yay!
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8/25/04 03:50 pm (UTC)I think most especially, that I enjoyed the way your dialog flows. Even in the fight scenes, or especially in the fights, everyone sounds so in character and natural. Not too pre-thought out.
I just wish the story had lasted until Lex taught Clark about fingering. Mmmm... porn! So glad I found your journal! Yay!