Come closer. 'Cause I'm going to huggle you and snuggle you and scream TOO PRECIOUS FOR THIS WORLD at the top of my lungs. And then--Imma make you cookies. Shhh. Whether you want them or not.
I will rewrite smaller portions of this and cut all the shmoop, and I think I'm heading closer to where I want to be. Plus I had another character in it who needs to say buhbye because now that I'm thinking clearer about this, he's just a distraction who doesn't add much to the story, in fact, his story is basically the Match Boys story retold. There should only be one MatchBoy per story!
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2/26/09 04:37 am (UTC)I will rewrite smaller portions of this and cut all the shmoop, and I think I'm heading closer to where I want to be. Plus I had another character in it who needs to say buhbye because now that I'm thinking clearer about this, he's just a distraction who doesn't add much to the story, in fact, his story is basically the Match Boys story retold. There should only be one MatchBoy per story!