there might be some changes coming up for Patrick and Sam!
That little bit might have been unclear-I meant to show how Sam is growing taller. In the beginning of the story, he had to stand on tip-toe to see his eyes in the mirror, now if he stands on tiptoe, he's too tall to see his eyes. And re-reading it, it definitely needs a little work, that! *G*
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3/13/09 04:07 am (UTC)That little bit might have been unclear-I meant to show how Sam is growing taller. In the beginning of the story, he had to stand on tip-toe to see his eyes in the mirror, now if he stands on tiptoe, he's too tall to see his eyes. And re-reading it, it definitely needs a little work, that! *G*