Oh, of course just when Lex has reconciled how he feels and where he is-- WHAM! Incoming wrench in the works! :(
Apart from that cliffhanger, this chapter was really enjoyable. (And the cliffy was necessary, I understand that. I just refuse to like it. Hmmph.) The specifics of how Kal works during sex was very interesting, and not something most people would put in there. I always love the details, the mechanics behind the characters and their actions, and this is just one example of how awesomely you trap me into this story every time. Your writing just sucks me in and I wouldn't be surprised to find I hold my breath while reading. Commenting does feel a lot like coming up for air. *wink*
Great job, hon, as usual! I always look forward to more!
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9/28/09 12:18 am (UTC)Apart from that cliffhanger, this chapter was really enjoyable. (And the cliffy was necessary, I understand that. I just refuse to like it. Hmmph.) The specifics of how Kal works during sex was very interesting, and not something most people would put in there. I always love the details, the mechanics behind the characters and their actions, and this is just one example of how awesomely you trap me into this story every time. Your writing just sucks me in and I wouldn't be surprised to find I hold my breath while reading. Commenting does feel a lot like coming up for air. *wink*
Great job, hon, as usual! I always look forward to more!