Dean's section was so lovely, the prose, I mean. The well metaphor just blows my mind (heh. blows), and how excited he is at making the Colt and the knife -- gorgeous work!
Well, I assume he's the one going to make THE Colt and THE knife. Sorry if I'm confused. *scratches head*
But Sam's part was just. . . rough. God, my chest *aches* from reading what that boy's thinking. He's so used to being treated like worse than dirt, that some reciprocation during "sex" simply. . . knocks him off his metaphorical feet. *squishes Sam* Man, I really hope this story has a happy-ish ending for these two, with, you know, them together? *crosses fingers*
Also, GO DOG! Ha! There's a nice commentary on the barn's goings-on from *his* perspective! XD
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7/14/10 04:21 pm (UTC)Dean's section was so lovely, the prose, I mean. The well metaphor just blows my mind (heh. blows), and how excited he is at making the Colt and the knife -- gorgeous work!
Well, I assume he's the one going to make THE Colt and THE knife. Sorry if I'm confused. *scratches head*
But Sam's part was just. . . rough. God, my chest *aches* from reading what that boy's thinking. He's so used to being treated like worse than dirt, that some reciprocation during "sex" simply. . . knocks him off his metaphorical feet. *squishes Sam* Man, I really hope this story has a happy-ish ending for these two, with, you know, them together? *crosses fingers*
Also, GO DOG! Ha! There's a nice commentary on the barn's goings-on from *his* perspective! XD
*scampers off to read next section*