This would be the part where I start thinking you're some kind of tease!! Two parts where you stop just as you are giving us hints of uber-hotness to come, and then with the G-rated fic?
Aiiieee! It's a damn good thing little Clex is so goshdarn cute! *G* But more on that topic later. For now...
*pants* I love how you managed to show the action/reaction going on with all three of them - it really illustrates how the hotness feedback would work. Or at least how I'd imagine it would work. The part that really gets me is when Lex is narrating Clark and Bruce's actions interspersed with his own feelings.
Clark looked so calm, so focused on what he was doing, only his dick, jerking each time he put his hand on Le'’s bare flesh, drooling precome with every breath that Bruce gasped into Lex's ear, gave any indication of what Clark was feeling.
Like here! Okay, I have to backtrack because Clark's cock jerking with each touch of Lex's skin to also too friggin hot to skip *dies* *No really. Deaddeaddead!*
Um.. oh, yeah. So, the intertwining of Clark's desire and Bruces gasps is fabulous. A really excellent way to handle what is such an essentially complicated situation.
The whole thing is supah-dupah hot!! Please let alpha-Clark keep playing!
I only have one little confusion - I'm not sure where they were when in relation to standing on the floor, being on the bed, etc. Um... really, in relation to the hotness of your porny crack, this is almost irrelevant.
My God, you bring the porn in fabulous ways, woman! *dies happy*
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More!! *g*
10/1/04 04:06 am (UTC)This would be the part where I start thinking you're some kind of tease!! Two parts where you stop just as you are giving us hints of uber-hotness to come, and then with the G-rated fic?
Aiiieee! It's a damn good thing little Clex is so goshdarn cute! *G* But more on that topic later. For now...
*pants* I love how you managed to show the action/reaction going on with all three of them - it really illustrates how the hotness feedback would work. Or at least how I'd imagine it would work. The part that really gets me is when Lex is narrating Clark and Bruce's actions interspersed with his own feelings.
Clark looked so calm, so focused on what he was doing, only his dick, jerking each time he put his hand on Le'’s bare flesh, drooling precome with every breath that Bruce gasped into Lex's ear, gave any indication of what Clark was feeling.
Like here! Okay, I have to backtrack because Clark's cock jerking with each touch of Lex's skin to also too friggin hot to skip *dies* *No really. Deaddeaddead!*
Um.. oh, yeah. So, the intertwining of Clark's desire and Bruces gasps is fabulous. A really excellent way to handle what is such an essentially complicated situation.
The whole thing is supah-dupah hot!! Please let alpha-Clark keep playing!
I only have one little confusion - I'm not sure where they were when in relation to standing on the floor, being on the bed, etc. Um... really, in relation to the hotness of your porny crack, this is almost irrelevant.
My God, you bring the porn in fabulous ways, woman!
*dies happy*