I only have one little confusion - I'm not sure where they were when in relation to standing on the floor, being on the bed, etc. Um... really, in relation to the hotness of your porny crack, this is almost irrelevant.
yeah, I thought it was plain where they were but reading it again just now, it's a little fuzzy, I think I can tighten that, yes-- wow, everyones been so positive about this 3-some, I wish I could shout it in the streets, "I wrote threesome porn and it worked!" but sadly, it will just make the neighbors call the cops so --thank you for your warm and toasty feedback!
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Re: More!! *g*
10/1/04 04:23 am (UTC)yeah, I thought it was plain where they were but reading it again just now, it's a little fuzzy, I think I can tighten that, yes--
wow, everyones been so positive about this 3-some, I wish I could shout it in the streets, "I wrote threesome porn and it worked!" but sadly, it will just make the neighbors call the cops so --thank you for your warm and toasty feedback!