Do I *really* need to know what chocolates were in a Whitman's Sampler box in 1924? Does the reader really give a shit? Stop procrastinating and get to the good parts. :(
As someone who spends their day either doing proofing or hearing about other people proofing, I appreciate your attention to detail! Reading things at work like "chocolate moose" and "serf and turf" and "nip it in the butt" make me appreciate the intelligent people on livejournal all the more!
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5/12/12 02:49 am (UTC)Do you *really* want your characters eating chocolates that *weren't invented yet*???
THIS IS IMPORTANT STUFF, LADY!!
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