SpN: It Was a Sort of Darkish and Kind of Rainy Afternoon

[roxy]

porn, new roxy style! eta: I forgot to blame this on--I mean credit--tabaqui



Sam kicks the door open and hauls Dean ass-backwards through it, sends him crashing against the wall and he's on him like white on rice. Snaps Dean's jeans open--*rips* them open, and shoves his hand inside. He grips Dean's dick like it's the last thing in life he's going to do. "Dean—"

"Sam what the fu—uuhh…"

Sam works Dean until Dean's on his toes, huffing and puffing, works him until he shudders and his emerald eyes go wide, his plump, tinted lips form a perfect O



and Sam can see his dick fitting that plump ring like a ....

Dean gasps, shivers from head to toe. His release breaks like the crest of


Sam desperately tries to keep from falling over with him—every nerve fires in pleasure, like in his blood.


He yanks Dean's jeans down, they drop around his ankles. Sam grips Dean's ass, long fingers slipping in


and Sam imagines

how good it would be to be in him…the image is so strong, so hot,



it's too much.


He comes to himself, slowly, aching, but in a good way




dripping wet, sweat and come, his forehead pressed to Dean's equally wet neck. "Sooo…is this something we have to talk about?"

Comments

[chellexxx.livejournal.com]

you didn't think there were enough visuals in the prose you had to use pictures???? This is awesome. The gif of the train has me giggling still :D
xxx

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

LOL!!

I just really wanted to *koff* nail it home*koff*

I'm so glad it made you laugh, I was giggling myself! :D

[tipsy-kitty.livejournal.com]

Hee, rebus porn! Fantastic!

(even better on my computer, it was all still images when I read on my phone :)

I know there was a Hitchcock movie that used imagery of the train barreling through the tunnel, but damned if I can remember which one...

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Rebus porn--Heeeeee!

I know there was a Hitchcock movie that used imagery of the train

OMG, really? LOL!! The image must have been lurking in my subconscious--we can blame Hitchcock for it!

[firesign10.livejournal.com]

Hahahahahaha!!!!! You are so fabulous LOL!

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

*GRIIIIIIIIIIIIIN*

"I do what I can," she said, modestly. ;)

[tabaqui]

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
OMG!!

HAAAAAAAAAWT, bb, so hawt!!
*twirls you*


*omg omg, you are the best evar!!!*

:)

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

All for you, beloved, all for you! ♥

[tabaqui]

You spoil me.
:)
*beams at you*

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

BRAVA! Excellent use of visuals! :D

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

*GRINS*

Thank you, thank you! It was terrific fun! :D

[sweptawaybayou.livejournal.com]

lmao!!!

excellent. you are lovely.

:)

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

*BLUSHGRINS*
♥ ♥

[gingersnap1224.livejournal.com]

Bwaahahaha! You are killing me.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Birthday month, yeah!! *giggles*

[iibnf.livejournal.com]

Have a wonderful birthday, hun!

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Thank you!! I plan on enjoying it until the wheels fall off! :)

[ash-carpenter.livejournal.com]

Made. Of. Win. !!!!!!!

Funny, but this actually really worked! The visuals - particularly of the geysers and fireworks - really gave it urgency and explosiveness!!!! :D

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

*GRINS*

Why, thank you! I like to think of it as art /porn. *smiles modestly*

;)

[quiet--tiger.livejournal.com]

Pretty damn funny! More stories should come with visuals... no pun intended... I think if more people worked out their sex scenes like this, there would be fewer weird purple metaphors!

The cigarette one is really effective and really illustrates the words you used in a way I wouldn't have quite understood, but then I can go okay, that works.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

*GGG* Thanks!

The cigarette one I loved but I also kind of wondered about--is a post-coital smoke still a working cliche?

[quiet--tiger.livejournal.com]

I think the cigarette thing, even if people don't smoke, know of its existence, certainly enough to understand it. As time marches on it might develop a more cartoony sort of connotation.