Soldier

12/8/04 11:59 pm
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Now for something completely different. Rated G for the moment, no SV, no SV AU, hopefully SF. Based on the character Kurt Russell played in Soldier, slash because if it's not there, don't matter, I'll cram it in anyway. *G*
Like ta see it? here it is!


Today
Based on “Soldier”
12-08-04
Roxy

2004

SUBJECT: BABY BOY/ DNA DONOR: TODD, R.
INCHES: 19
WEIGHT: 7LBS
BLOOD TYPE:0 POS
SS: 3465

2007

Tody it had green gelo.it lke the gelo.the gelo is good many timesgood.

Tday is a good day. It hav the jello tday .It push its fingr in the jello. And the jello break. Jello is swet .

Today it weted from the eys. it hurt hurt make the eys wet.the seeo was make a frwn and hited it.it was hited manytimes. it wil not wet from the eys agan

2008

Today It is go to big class. It is have rel teacer. It lik new words .words are good manytimes good.

Today it is learn new word. Thes are the word it learned.
I

Me

You

Mine

all these words are mene it. why are so many words for it? This bok are mine bok. It is not to say it.It must say I. I do not know why. When I are not saying I I are being hit. I will say I.

Today we learn more and more words, and something very fine. We learn numbers.1 2 3 4 111 22 33333. I am 4 years. We learn that today. All the we are 4 years. I think 3 is very pretty. Like the green jello. 33333333333 it is pretty. I write it many times in my book.

Today I am bad. I was bad. I think. I read my book and in the book there are words about boys and pictures of boys. There are a house and a father and picture of father, and then there are black marks. There are black marks on the words and black marks on the pictures. I asked the seeo and he was mad. I must sit in the iso lation. For a long time. I am sad.

Today, my books have no black marks. My books have no pictures. I ask the others and they have no pictures. Some do not care, some are sad.

2009

Today we have new clothes. I am sad. I like the old clothes better. They are softer. But the seeo said the clothes are good. The uniforms are good, and we will love them.

Today I wear my uniform and I am happy. I love my uniform. It means we are together. We are a unit. And that is a good thing.

Today we had rabbits in class. I held a rabbit. It was soft and pretty. It hopped. All of the squad had a rabbit for our lesson. It made a noise when I broke it. I learned it had red blood like we do. And it’s bones break like we do too. Some troop do not break the rabbit and we do not see them again.

Today our lesson was strength. The platoon sat in the lecture hall and there were cages made of glass, in one side is a pig. It does not look like the picture I remember of a pig. It is not pink and does not have a funny face. It is hairy and has big big teeth and smells bad. And in the other part of it are dogs three dogs, and they put them together in the cage, and the dogs kill the pig. They bite it open until it makes noise and bleeds. All the blood came out of it, and some hit the cage. The glass is bloody. The lesson is this , more makes you strong. The unit together is strong. One is not as strong even if it is bigger and has big teeth. Some troop throw up and we do not see them again. Is it because they made their area dirty? I do not know.

2012

Today we did tests in class. The tests were good. I liked doing the test. I did them the fastest of the squad. When I was finished, I listen to the voice. The voice tells us many things. The voice lets us know who we are. It good to hear the voice. We are never alone with the voice.

Today we took many, many tests they were hard. We did tests for our brain and tests for our body. We are learning hand –to- hand combat, and martial arts. We work hard, we have to. I am always good in my class.
Two more troop are gone—some disappear after every class now. We do not look, we do not ask.

Today a boy hit me. The seeo watched when I hit the boy back. The instructor watched. All the people watched. I hit him until he stopped moving. He had a lot of blood on his face. My hands hurt, and my face where I got hit. No one stopped the fight. I do not think he will be back again.

2016

Today, we had a very hard class. Class is getting harder all the time, but I like it. I like to use my brain and my body. I like being strong. I don’t have to fight anyone out of class any more. No troop tries to make me mad anymore. Most of the troops look at me when they have questions. Most of the time I have the answer, if not the seeo does. Riley is the next best. He’s very good. Strong and fast. He’s smart too. He’s a good trooper.

Today Bradley helped me break down the mats in the gym. He’s strong. He has very bright eyes. He smiles a lot. But only when we are in the barracks. He asked about my book, and I showed it to him. He asked if he could read it. I think why not,the Sarge reads it, the Seeo reads it. Only the other troops don’t read it. It still felt funny. But he asked me first so I let him read it and he smiled. I like that.

Today we ran a long long time and I carried the squad colors. I ran and held it and I remembered how to hold it I didn’t let it drop and I didn’t let anything else in my head. I didn’t think about my breath hurting or my knees or my legs, I just ran and my feet hit the ground one, two, one, two. We ran a long time and one troop dropped back. I did not see it because eyes front but I heard the shot. You must keep up with the squad.
The unit is many and many makes strong. The unit is only as strong as the soldiers in it. There is no room for the weak.



End part one.

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12/9/04 05:44 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] capnzebbie.livejournal.com
*whimper* This is just perfect. I can tell it's going to break my heart. Please give me a happy ending. *puppy dog eyes*

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12/9/04 06:03 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you! I didn't expect any FB on this at all! You liked it? Cool! *roxy be all grinny and stuff* Happy ending...I'm all about the happy endings! Ask anyone!

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12/9/04 06:41 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] capnzebbie.livejournal.com
I'm all about the happy endings!

Cool! I always like happy endings. Even when they're not logical at all. :)

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12/9/04 07:19 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
*whistles, stares at ceiling*

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12/9/04 11:25 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Erf!! I forgot to ask, does it have the flavor of the movie at all?

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12/10/04 04:46 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] capnzebbie.livejournal.com
It does. It seems like it could be exactly what goes on in his head. Matter-of-fact, completely in the present, focused on learning and improving, doing the job, being perfect. I think it's exactly right that each journal entry starts with "Today."

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12/9/04 06:42 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kaydee23.livejournal.com
I don't know the movie you're slashing, but I enjoyed reading the soldier's evolution.

*Gulp* Is it *My Riley* ooops *Our Riley* in the story?

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12/9/04 07:18 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
No, sadly, not our Riley-- damn! I wish I'd thought of it. No, so far, I'm going real close to the movie. Thanks for commenting, it makes me feel like a princess! Or a moderately wealthy Duchess! :)

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12/9/04 08:28 am (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
Gaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!
Oh, man.
You are evol bitca queen of hurty-good!!
*flails*

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12/9/04 02:00 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] justabi.livejournal.com
Man, I have never seen this movie, or even heard of it, but now I want to. It reminds me of this book, Ender's Game, that I really liked. But what I like is that though I is getting more sophisticated, I is completely indoctrinated, even though not all those around I are. There are no personal desires beyond Jello. It will be interesting to see some emerge. Anyway, you write it, I read it, we're all happy. Okay, well, I'm happy. I doubt any amount of praise will make up for your stature, and thus you will never be fully happy. But I am.

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12/9/04 04:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
I take your praise in the spirit in which it is intended. I'm most grateful the story seems to interest you, and you approve of it. This is most gratifying to me. However, I suggest you protect your ankles. I am of course not threatening you, goodness no. I'm simply suggesting...watch out for your ankles.

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12/9/04 04:00 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] suzvoy.livejournal.com
Poor bunny! Eeeek!

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12/9/04 04:15 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
He kills a classmate, but it's the bunny that gets you, hmm? Okaaay...

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12/9/04 06:10 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] suzvoy.livejournal.com
I have strange priorities.

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