Stand By Me 25b
2/22/05 01:10 pmI probably should have said 25a on the first bit, hunh? So after this part, Clark said,"Fuck you Rose." But I'm using that gentle persuasion thing on him. And promising a three way after all, plus a big sparkly 1930's musical style finish--but without the singing...and the dancing...and the great big movable sets-- but swear! It'll be fun! (and entirely self indulgent--shut up! at least i warn you...)
When he woke again, the room was bright—dawn was well on it’s way to full morning and the sun made the closed curtains glow .He could clearly make out Lionel in the chair next to the bed—Lex jerked fully awake with a gasp and a ghost of pain running up his arm. There was a dried film of blood coating his arm and a slice gaped wetly, flared into pain as he remembered what happened.
“Awake again. Good. We’re going to continue now.” Lionel stood and flexed the rod. “Are you ready? Not that it really matters, hmm?” Lex breathed in quickly, trying to prepare himself for the lash.
It hissed through the air and struck like fire—the air in his lungs rushed out in a grunt—again and again, he was struck so quickly he had no chance to draw breath, he felt dizzy, blackness rushed in from the corners and he was pathetically grateful.smack Lionel held his head back at an uncomfortable angle. “Wake up. Wake up so you can see it coming,” he snarled, and smacked Lex again.
Lex groaned, he knew he was going to die today. He never doubted it. Clark. He felt so horribly sorry that he was going to die and make Clark suffer. He didn’t want Clark to lose him, not like this. The thought of hurting Clark made tears roll down his cheek. He blinked quickly to clear his eyes—he needed to see, he needed to be aware. Death was coming and he wanted to face it.
Lionel began whipping him in earnest. He laid the rod against him in a fury, hard, methodical strikes that rocked him to his soul. He panted harder and harder, pants turning to groans, groans to gasps…he forgot not to scream, he forgot not wanting to hurt Clark, he forgot everything except Death….
“I’m afraid your life is going to take a dramatic turn for the worse before it comes.” A swooping arc of ice raced through the fire on his back and he knew Lionel had cut a long line from shoulder to shoulder, and again lower, again deeper, and Lex wondered how long he would have to survive this.
The blade drove into him and Lionel rocked it from side to side and Lex howled—it went on forever and ever and then the blade slid, he could feel Lionel’s hand skid in the blood, and sink down to his thigh. The blade slid between his buttocks and stopped. He could feel blood beginning to cool on his skin, the pain came in waves and his mind was full of odd images—stars and ice and cold, cold water, blood and women, girls smiling at him, his cock in wet tight heat, ice cubes on his skin, fingers in him, stretching him, feeling good and suddenly he jerked, was back in his body and feeling like he’d dropped from a enormous height.
Lionel was bent at his side, eyes searching his face. “Oh excellent. You’re back. You’re going to like this part," he said and moved out of Lex’s line of sight. He felt Lionel's hand sticking and pulling at the tacky blood on his skin. He felt something prodding at his hole and he began screaming, all rational thought gone at the cold touch. “Please nonono—daddy daddy don’t don’t!”
Lex felt blood spray up his back and spatter the sheets; a weight dropped on him and he heard someone shouting, yelling, “Bastard bastard bastard” over and over—and underneath it all he heard a dull crunching sound he couldn’t make sense of. The weight lifted, he was pulled free from the bed so quickly it hurt and then Clark was holding him, gasping, patting his face, holding him, rocking him, touching him, holding—“Lex, Lex, oh my God, Lex--"
I'm under my desk now--tbc...
When he woke again, the room was bright—dawn was well on it’s way to full morning and the sun made the closed curtains glow .He could clearly make out Lionel in the chair next to the bed—Lex jerked fully awake with a gasp and a ghost of pain running up his arm. There was a dried film of blood coating his arm and a slice gaped wetly, flared into pain as he remembered what happened.
“Awake again. Good. We’re going to continue now.” Lionel stood and flexed the rod. “Are you ready? Not that it really matters, hmm?” Lex breathed in quickly, trying to prepare himself for the lash.
It hissed through the air and struck like fire—the air in his lungs rushed out in a grunt—again and again, he was struck so quickly he had no chance to draw breath, he felt dizzy, blackness rushed in from the corners and he was pathetically grateful.smack Lionel held his head back at an uncomfortable angle. “Wake up. Wake up so you can see it coming,” he snarled, and smacked Lex again.
Lex groaned, he knew he was going to die today. He never doubted it. Clark. He felt so horribly sorry that he was going to die and make Clark suffer. He didn’t want Clark to lose him, not like this. The thought of hurting Clark made tears roll down his cheek. He blinked quickly to clear his eyes—he needed to see, he needed to be aware. Death was coming and he wanted to face it.
Lionel began whipping him in earnest. He laid the rod against him in a fury, hard, methodical strikes that rocked him to his soul. He panted harder and harder, pants turning to groans, groans to gasps…he forgot not to scream, he forgot not wanting to hurt Clark, he forgot everything except Death….
“I’m afraid your life is going to take a dramatic turn for the worse before it comes.” A swooping arc of ice raced through the fire on his back and he knew Lionel had cut a long line from shoulder to shoulder, and again lower, again deeper, and Lex wondered how long he would have to survive this.
The blade drove into him and Lionel rocked it from side to side and Lex howled—it went on forever and ever and then the blade slid, he could feel Lionel’s hand skid in the blood, and sink down to his thigh. The blade slid between his buttocks and stopped. He could feel blood beginning to cool on his skin, the pain came in waves and his mind was full of odd images—stars and ice and cold, cold water, blood and women, girls smiling at him, his cock in wet tight heat, ice cubes on his skin, fingers in him, stretching him, feeling good and suddenly he jerked, was back in his body and feeling like he’d dropped from a enormous height.
Lionel was bent at his side, eyes searching his face. “Oh excellent. You’re back. You’re going to like this part," he said and moved out of Lex’s line of sight. He felt Lionel's hand sticking and pulling at the tacky blood on his skin. He felt something prodding at his hole and he began screaming, all rational thought gone at the cold touch. “Please nonono—daddy daddy don’t don’t!”
Lex felt blood spray up his back and spatter the sheets; a weight dropped on him and he heard someone shouting, yelling, “Bastard bastard bastard” over and over—and underneath it all he heard a dull crunching sound he couldn’t make sense of. The weight lifted, he was pulled free from the bed so quickly it hurt and then Clark was holding him, gasping, patting his face, holding him, rocking him, touching him, holding—“Lex, Lex, oh my God, Lex--"
I'm under my desk now--tbc...
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2/22/05 06:32 pm (UTC)Whew.
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2/22/05 07:27 pm (UTC)The hug in the icon is for *me*, BTW.
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2/22/05 07:31 pm (UTC)Wha...? Crunch? Ooooo *biggrin* Was that crunch Lionel?
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2/22/05 08:15 pm (UTC)Oh Lex, Oh Clark. yay rescue and at least Lex heals. I would tell Clark to take Lex home - to Martha - but I don't know that that is an option any more.
I hope the crunching was just limbs - Lionel does not deserve to be dead so quickly. There needs to be some public humiliation and maiming - "Princess Bride" - style to the pain.
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2/22/05 08:24 pm (UTC)thank goodness.
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2/22/05 08:39 pm (UTC)Now at least Clark and Whitney can nurse Lex back to health without the weight of Lionel over their heads or worrying that at the last minute up pops the knife-welding psycho.
The Goddess is please with the offering - blessing on your house ;-]
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2/22/05 10:26 pm (UTC)Oh, my poor dear Lex...and he doesn't even have the fast healing, or does he?
My heart is tight, please update soon!
And darling Clark, after being so brave now saves his love!
Thank you...
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2/23/05 02:47 am (UTC)*hugs you*
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2/23/05 03:01 am (UTC)let me be really blunt
2/23/05 04:56 am (UTC)I had enough of that shit in Highlander, the fandom that can heal anything except beheading.
And emotional scarring, even for a mutant meta human healer? Is forever. Lex will NEVER want sex again after this and I can't blame him.
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese!
Because? That's exactly what I felt like I was reading. And it made me sick beyond belief even though Clark got to him at some point right then.
Really far out there bdsm and extreme violence, fine. This? No.
Nonetheless, if that's what it was, I respect your courage in writing it. I just can't personally handle it.
I still love ya, sweetie, and I have every faith in the world that you'll get the rest of the story back from your brain and retyped.
{{huggles}}
Re: let me be really blunt
2/23/05 05:48 am (UTC)all rational thought gone at the cold touch that's all, my beloved--even *I* don't go that far. I also don't believe in magic healing sex, just so you know :) It would make a fascinating story to follow Lex as he rebuilt from this life of his, and if I were skilled enough I'd love to write it, but *shrug*
Like I said before I know I walk a thin line here, sometimes I wander over the edge, but I mean to be evol, not mean-spirited or offensive. I promise, you'll never have to up-chuck here at Casa Big Echoey.
Please don't be upset, my beloved! I can't stand the thought!
Also, just to let you know, Clark didn't kill Lionel, there's no way he could handle killing him himself. That was supposed to come right on the heels of this bit but--*gasp!* I was *punished*
Listen, I *want* folks to call me on stuff that bothers them-- thanks for speaking up, and not just keeping it to yourself. (((((((hugs you so many times))))))))
*whew*
2/23/05 09:48 am (UTC)Heh, glad to know your limits, although I am still remembering the crunching body of that woman on the train in your Russian Clex. *eg*
And I'm also happy to know this:
I also don't believe in magic healing sex, just so you know :) It would make a fascinating story to follow Lex as he rebuilt from this life of his, and if I were skilled enough I'd love to write it, but *shrug*
Ace did it for Clark and Tzi and Zechsy did it for both Lex and Clark. All of them wrote excellently. I have faith in you, your work is just as powerful. Still, having said that, I'm just as grateful they didn't write that particular type of rape either, though I seem to remember its implication.
And no fear, I never thought you were mean-spirited or offensive.
Not so upset now. *g*
Whitney killed Lionel maybe or Jonathan? *on edge of my seat* Type faster! *g*
I am thankful you don't mind my having been honest. There is no way I would demand you honor my squick. That would be silly and I have no right to dictate your writing. Still, I'm glad it's kewl to talk about. Your writing style fascinates me.
{{{{{hugs back just as tight}}}}}}
ETA - correction 2x! ;)
Re: *whew*
2/23/05 03:15 pm (UTC)I thought you were just being euphemistic in your choice of wording. It scared the dickens out of me, which, btw? BRAVO
See? Evol...*blushes and still feels mean, hugs you quick*
Ace did it for Clark and Tzi and Zechsy did it for both Lex and Clark. All of them wrote excellently. I have faith in you, your work is just as powerful. Still, having said that, I'm just as grateful they didn't write that particular type of rape either, though I seem to remember its implication.
heh...This part I read about a hundred times. I may read it a hundred more. I'm going to read it and grin like a loon and then I'm going to trip Mr. Roxy, hold him down and read it to him. Sure he'll think I'm nuts but--wait...he knows that...Wow.Thank you! Thank you very much. THat really makes me feel like I'm doing something pretty good here, maybe something better than pretty good. *hides* You have nooooo idea what a quivering mass of insecurity I am--*whispers* don't let anyone else know, I tryin' to maintain my rep. *bigscowl*
I'm glad you feel better, and the next bits will lighten up, thank god! I'm ready for some laughs! (or porn, that works too!)
About damn time.
2/23/05 06:19 am (UTC)::pats Clark::
::bandages Lex::
::burns Lionel's body until it is ash and then scatters it to the four winds::
Amen
Re: About damn time.
2/23/05 06:31 am (UTC)AMEN!!!!
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2/24/05 12:51 am (UTC)Ahhhhhh..
Jayzus.
Oh man.
*hugs you*
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2/24/05 01:05 am (UTC)Yes, please.
Jayzus.
*pets you*