I just finished your stories (in two days no less! It was soooooo long that I have to cut them up, hahahha) and like to say that I really love them!
I really love Ripley, though I hated how they could just forget about the ethical thing with Lex killing off Lana (as hateful as she was). I mean, though that's the reason why Clark left in the first place...
I was a little sad about how there was little character development with Jordan coughsthreesomcoughs cause he sounds like a totally cool guy, who cares if he's Mary Marty Sue (I hope I'm right though, I stopped watching SV halfway through season 1.)
I can't tell you how much I love these. I especially love what you've done with part two. It was amazing. Simply amazing. I've been coming back to it for three days to re-read my favorite parts. I like the way you portray Clark and I love Lex as a parent and I really love Jordan and how his role evolved in the second part. I couldn't be happier that he and Lex ended up being so close. Thank you for writing this.
I love this. Like crazy. It took me forever to get around to reading the second part, but eventually I did and I love it so so much, even if it did make me so sad for Lex and how he punishes himself in parts. Lexie is a joy. *squeezes her* I'm glad she ended up being a forth Lana instead of half. That would have been hard on everyone.
Lex did the right thing, offing her! I'm sure of that. Jonathan had it straight. She was a threat to Lex's family, and Lex took care of it. Same as offing Nixon. Also, wow! Clark became a man-ho! I guess while he was growning up he had to get his experience so he wouldn't be wondering if he was too dependent on Lex.
I just had to re-read this. I still love it. Clark's horrible indecision about his sexuality is so perfect. I think it's universal, male or female, we still really just don't know until that little switch goes on and then it's like, "OH. Yeah. Okay."
I loved Lex stalking Clark and Jordan all over again, and I am all sad that they really have to stop being together because there must be CLex.
And your descriptions of Clark's terror at his physiological changes are just creepy and exciting and strangely hot at the same time. How do you DO that?
*hugs you bunches and goes off to read the second part*
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9/22/06 08:01 pm (UTC)I really love Ripley, though I hated how they could just forget about the ethical thing with Lex killing off Lana (as hateful as she was). I mean, though that's the reason why Clark left in the first place...
I was a little sad about how there was little character development with Jordan
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10/7/06 01:33 pm (UTC)I've been coming back to it for three days to re-read my favorite parts.
I like the way you portray Clark and I love Lex as a parent and I really love Jordan and how his role evolved in the second part. I couldn't be happier that he and Lex ended up being so close.
Thank you for writing this.
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4/17/07 05:03 pm (UTC)Lex did the right thing, offing her! I'm sure of that. Jonathan had it straight. She was a threat to Lex's family, and Lex took care of it. Same as offing Nixon. Also, wow! Clark became a man-ho! I guess while he was growning up he had to get his experience so he wouldn't be wondering if he was too dependent on Lex.
Whee!
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6/21/08 04:59 am (UTC)I loved Lex stalking Clark and Jordan all over again, and I am all sad that they really have to stop being together because there must be CLex.
And your descriptions of Clark's terror at his physiological changes are just creepy and exciting and strangely hot at the same time. How do you DO that?
*hugs you bunches and goes off to read the second part*
Bahaha!!
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