Wow -- your fragment is beautifully written; you've really captured the brutal feel of his early training, and it's so horrifying and so terribly sad. *hugs poor, nameless boy* Now you have to make things better for him! *eyes you sternly* And, when he's old enough, find him a proper life-companion. Hmmm.... *hopes to be reading more of this soon* Thanks so much again for the link! Is it all right if I share it with my friend?
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9/21/07 06:50 am (UTC)