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My friends, I know how wrong it is to whine and whimper in public. It's wrong to beg for sympathy. But I gotta tell you guys, sometimes it pays off pretty big!

See, [livejournal.com profile] myownghost was moved by my piteous whining for Clitney to write this little ficlet, just to shut me up to make me happy! This she tells me, she just tossed off at the spur of the moment, so it's unbetaed, (betad? beteaded?) and I should only be so good as to do something like this off the top of my head! I loved it so much I asked if I could share and she was kind enough to let me, so if you like it, please let her know here! (this has nothing to do with my insidious plan to get the whole world writing just for me….mmmmmmmm…heaven…) I'm leaving it just the way she wrote it because I like it like that. 




By [livejournal.com profile] myownghost

clark leans against the fence in the dark, not registering the chill of the chain links, his attention wholly on the couple up in the bleachers. they're necking, jackets open and hands not visible, and they're not noticing that he's there. he wants it that way. the boy eases the girl down onto her back on the rough wood bleacher seat, and his fair hair hangs down, hiding his face as he leans in to kiss her some more. clark doesn't know he's gently rubbing his crotch now against the fence.

the cloud covering the near-full moon moves on, and the action is suddenly lit as brightly as day. clark's mouth is open, his breath shallow. he's squinting a little, trying to see all he can of lana's face, of the flashes of skin exposed by whitney's hands as he slides them over her body. whitney's on his knees, and he's clearly getting aggressive. her hand comes up and pushes at him. he persists. she raises her other hand and pushes him away, her voice a mewling protest in the stillness. whitney sits back on his haunches and looks up at the moon. "lana," he says, voice holding the ache of desire denied, and not for the first time.

lana sits up, pulls her clothes together, buttons the letter jacket and stands. "you know i don't want to go that far yet," she complains, shaking her hair to straighten it from the snarl his hands made of it.

"yeah, yeah, i know." he hangs his head.

"i'm going home now," she says, moving primly down the stairs. "see you tomorrow at the game."

"'night." and she's walking toward the parking lot and her little car.

whitney throws himself backwards, leaning his head on the row of bleachers behind him. his arms are outstretched, palms pale in the moonlight. "why do i keep trying?" he asks the night.

"hey." clark is, to his own surprise, climbing the stairs down which lana just disappeared. "are you ok?"

with a jolt, whitney sits up, his face showing disbelief. "what the hell are you doing here, kent?" he bristles with antagonism. "spying?"

clark sits down about six feet away from him. "nah, just looking at the moon. i saw lana leaving and you still here looking sort of sick. wanted to make sure you're ok."

"you are such a liar." whitney relaxes, clearly not seeing clark as any kind of threat. "i see you watching lana all the time. shit, sometimes i can tell you're watching me. like what you see?" his grin is feral and sly.

clark's face registers his shock. he sputters, "i... no, i never..." he stops, flummoxed.

whitney stands and approaches him, his groin at the level of clark's face. "you want some of what lana left me with?" his hand rubs his crotch.

clark sidles away a little. panicky now, he holds up his hands as if to ward whitney off. "no, no, i don't..." he clears his throat. "why are you doing this?"

looking back up at the moon, whitney laughs bleakly. "bored, i guess. i love lana, but she is such a cock tease."

"hey, that's not a nice thing to call her!" outraged, clark moves in closer again, brows furrowed.

whitney's laugh is genuine this time. "you are such a cub scout, kent. like a little kid who doesn't know yet about sex. i wonder if you ever touch yourself in the bathroom, in your bed at night. do you, huh?" he lowers himself to his knees with a thump, hand moving again on his crotch.

for a few moments, there's only the sound of the friction of his hand on the denim. clark is staring down at the movement as if hypnotized. slowly he raises his eyes to whitney's, and he swallows loudly. "sometimes. sometimes i do."

another cloud passes in front of the moon. in the renewed darkness, whitney reaches out to take one of clark's hands. unzipping his own fly and freeing his hard cock, he presses clark's hand against it. "let's see what kind of technique you have going for you. go on -- show me how you jerk yourself."

clark moves gently at first, his eyes closed. he listens to whitney's quickening breath, gauging the speed and pressure to maximize his response. he has no idea that his face is luminous in the dark, smile mysterious and deep. whitney sinks a hand into his hair, tugs it to pull clark's head back, and leans in for a long, hot kiss.

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1/10/08 12:49 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] myownghost.livejournal.com
i forgot to add "and they lived happily ever after." stupid me. *g*

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1/10/08 12:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sussixer.livejournal.com
Veeery nice. I like the predatory nature that the author gave Whit. Deep down I know that a guy like Clark will eventually become very dom in his relationships but this fits an early sv clark very well.

Bravo to the author and cu-dos to you for getting it written, whining or not. = )

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1/10/08 12:56 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
I *adore* a predatory Whit! I love him just a leeeettle bit of a bastard--just a touch!

Deep down I know that a guy like Clark will eventually become very dom in his relationships but this fits an early sv clark very well.

I never thought of it that way because I tend to write Clark as a bottom but I think you're right!

Heee! I'll do anything I have to....*GRIN*

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1/10/08 12:57 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
nononono!! This way is better! *GRINS*

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1/10/08 12:58 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] myownghost.livejournal.com
all righty then, it's your story now. ;D

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1/10/08 01:21 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mahaliem.livejournal.com
What a nice present!

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1/10/08 04:30 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
unless you post it on one of the fic comms in which case, you have to put the ending you like. *eyeballs you, tries to use power of mind to get you to post at SV fanfic...*

*GRINS*

I'm in a mood, lol!!

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1/10/08 04:32 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Isn't it wonderful?
It's been the oddest weeks of complete highs and horrible lows--this is definitely in the plus column, it really made my day!

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1/10/08 04:37 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rosy5000.livejournal.com
DAY-AMN!!!! If this is the result of you whining... keep it up. ;D THat was freaking hot!

Love just the slight forcefullness of Whitney. ;D Sooooooo Sexy!!!

Thank you [livejournal.com profile] myownghost. :D

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1/10/08 04:43 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
I swear, this story makes me just so damn happy--you and me like our Whit's the same flavor, yay!!

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1/10/08 05:07 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rosy5000.livejournal.com
Whitney has a flavor? ;D Is it chocolate? Cuz I REALLY LOVE chocolate. *grins*

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1/10/08 06:07 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
mmmmm...whit dipped in chocolate, sprinkled with chocolate and drizzled with chocolate sauce....

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1/10/08 06:34 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rosy5000.livejournal.com
Don't forget chocolate whipped cream and chocolate sprinkles. ;D

*off to have very happy dreams*

*huggles*

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1/10/08 11:33 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] myownghost.livejournal.com
you're very welcome. i'm happy you liked it!

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1/10/08 11:36 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] myownghost.livejournal.com
me at SV fan fic? huh. i'll look into that. i have a few things at the Archive at the End of the Universe, as you may know (the little ficlet about lex & jonathan, e.g.). hmmm...

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1/10/08 11:56 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] myownghost.livejournal.com
just in case you'd be interested: deep dark.

that was written in much the same way at this whitney ficlet -- just slamming it out. it's my favorite way to write, for some reason! i really admire your ability to write epic-length story arcs. i tend to run out of gas after a few chapters. it seems my specialty is little bits of off-kilterness. (as opposed to up-kilterness. *g*)

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1/10/08 02:39 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Oh heck yeah, I know that one--I love that story!

If you were in my kitchen with me for a coffee and a chat, right now, you'd be wondering how it is that I ever stop--I do tend to go on. :)

The short pieces kind of come like that though--suddenly the whole thing just pops into my head and I just have to type it.

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1/10/08 03:52 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] myownghost.livejournal.com
yes, just like that -- an idea presents itself, and away i go. the ficlets tend to end abruptly, too, but the unfinished feel is part of what i like about them!

that coffee & a chat sounds really good. :)

thanks for liking the deep dark! somehow jonathan perving on lex kind of sent me into orbit that night. *g*

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1/10/08 09:13 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] supercaptain182.livejournal.com
Freaking yay! I would offer you chocolates and many other earthly treasures, because this is awesome!

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