It's Time

[roxy]

For some new stuff, hunh? After dropping tons of hints, I will do what I got this thing for, and drop some new fic on ya'll!

let's go to the intro, shall we?



From far away he heard the words. Far away like they were being shouted down a tunnel. Wake up. Wake up! So he opened his eyes and was mildly surprised that it didn’t help.

The words were still coming to him from the end of a tunnel only now there was an unpleasant light to go with it. He could see this person, this person he knew but he couldn’t get a name and a face to go together—he couldn’t get the voice and the mouth to go together…it was like watching a badly dubbed Japanese movie, only the fight scenes were boring, they were mostly about shaking him back and forth.

And if that didn’t stop right now, he might throw up. Now the voice was loud and soft and then loud again—fuck, he wished the voice would stop, and the shaking extended to the whole room now, if he wasn’t so sure he was dying he might have had to laugh about that.

Now Voice was waving his hand in front of his eyes, and he did snicker than, Voice’s fingers were jumping off his hand and then jumping back, and damn-- laughing--that had been a Very Bad Idea-- he leaned over and threw up.

God, he was dying—shit! He still had stuff he wanted to do—like right now, throw up, and he threw up again. Fuck, that hurt, he felt something snap that time, but better now—Voice is shrieking something now, no volume control on that idiot—now he’s whispering again, oh-how nice, he’s wiping his face with a-- what is that, burlap, shit—it’s like sandpaper and oh! –Here we go again—and he threw up.

Voice finally shut the fuck up, and thank you very much for turning the lights off—

Comments

[katholicgrrl.livejournal.com]

OOh this is cool and i haven't got a clue who it is! nbut i'm sure looking forward to finding ouy!

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

LOL! Fuck, you're right!!! I didn't put any info on it did I ! What an idiot! oh well....I MEANT to do that, yah--that's right, it's part of the mystery! *snorf* better step back off the crack, I guess....

[tabaqui]

Okay that was WEIRD. But i liked it.

More, right?
:)

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Coming ,yes, more! lol!

[fromward.livejournal.com]

oh man. i want more.

good stuff. :)

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

thanks...I hope you like the next bit!

[treetracer]

Hmmm, I think I know, but I'll wait for the next bit yet...

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

*g*

[justabi.livejournal.com]

Yay! You decided to post after all! Go you. And I love what you sent me. So the right way to go. More pain for everyone! Just what I like.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

just to warn you I went a little...crazy at one point,heh! A little different then what we talked about. Because I'm weird like that!*g*

[justabi.livejournal.com]

Yeah, i saw that from what you sent me yesterday. I actually really like the bit with Lex and Bruce, so very, very painful. What of Johns?

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

oh, I really weirded the fuck out with him!

[justabi.livejournal.com]

Why, yes, yes you did. Impressively creepy. But you need more supporting stuff for it. It sort of came out of the blue. And definitely the transitions need work, but I love the order you've put things in. I am panting for the next bit. You want I should proofread or just wait till the end?

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Oh, yeah, fill in like crazy! You want to wait till the end, because I keep going back and you know, picking it apart anyway...

[justabi.livejournal.com]

That thing with the tongue? It so needs an explaination. Like some kind of chemical exposure at the plant making him want to make the storage tanks safer. Something like that. But, impressively creepy. Love that. Clark is going to save him, yes? And what about poor Bruce? Martha is going to eat him alive.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

does it? and e-mail me, so I can go on and on at great and boring length.

[justabi.livejournal.com]

Okay.

[draa-velven.livejournal.com]

Such a mystery. Who can it be? I want to know so I'm looking forward to the next part... which I hope you will post soon... :)

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

thank you *blush* it's pretty stright forward from here, hope you like the rest!

[theatervine.livejournal.com]

RTOFLMAO. Hi Lex. Hee.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

*beams*
I love BratPrinceLex!

[theatervine.livejournal.com]

And he's being SUCH a brat. Heh.

Exiled 1

[twinsarein.livejournal.com]

Wow, this is an intense start. I just discovered this. Somhow a link I clicked on (don't remember what now) brought me to the threesome chapter you had between Clark, Lex, and Bruce. I figured I had better start reading form the begining so here I am. Who the heck is talking here anyway...goes to find out.

Re: Exiled 1

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

wow, it's kind of hard to navigate through without numbered parts--I really didn't imagine anyone reading this stuff except the few folks who commented regularly back then. :) Boy this is an oldy! Thanks so much for reading this--I hope it's a good read for you!

Ah Bruce! It's been a while. Miss you!

Re: Exiled 1

[twinsarein.livejournal.com]

I really didn't imagine anyone reading this stuff except the few folks who commented regularly back then. Oh no, I love your stories and eventually want to read them all. I just have so little time to read anymore with the twins getting more active and sleeping less during the day, especially now that I am trying my hand at writing too. Sometimes it is all I can do to keep current, let alone read all the awesome stuff that was written before I discovered the fandom a year ago.

[confuzed.livejournal.com]

I have no idea what this is about, but I am going to give it a go. Have to get my unibrow waxed shortly and see if I can have a my phone fixed. I shall read this for the 30 mins til then.

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Heeee!

Gosh, this is such an old one--it surely needs a good editing! :)