heck yeah!

[roxy]

Here I am, feeling accomplished! I erased the extraneous character and blended his story into the character I couldn't bring myself to kill. It worked out pretty good. Good-bye Mike, I really liked you. *pout* Now my problem is that Sam wants to go off all willy-nilly, kind of have his cake and eat it too. I've tossed a dozen paragraphs out the window, and even if it doesn't seem like it, this is all very, very positive! yeah! Lot of hard work for a story about nothing. Boy, I do that a lot too. Write huge long long stories about *nothing*! And porn. I believe in porn. A little porn makes everything more interesting, yes?

"Sam, gonna come? You gonna come?" Sam felt Dean's dick dig into his thigh, the broad hot head felt huge, grinding into the crease of his thigh, slipping in the wet he was leaking---Sam bit his lip, wanting to live forever in that moment, and then Dean tightened his hand and pumped him, bit him, sucked at the thin skin right under his ear and it made everything Sam thought of as real and right, blow to pieces….

See? Doesn't that make you smile a little? That's not from the Lodi story, but sitll...*G*

Comments

[twinsarein.livejournal.com]

Writing can be a real bitch sometimes, but when you manage to fix something that just wasn't working and it just...clicks...it feels so good! Sounds like this fic is finally coming together for you - congrats.

Btw, yeah, the porn above goes a long way to making this a better night. *g*

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

lol! Well, I fixed that bit anyway! *G*