fic post:Dis Pater Kronos

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TITLE: Dis Pater:Kronos
PAIRING: Clark/Lex. Lucas/Lex. Bruce Wayne
RATING: 5--nc-17
A/N: angst, incest, general insanity

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[miche-connor.livejournal.com]

okay, first thoughts:

Lucas is just plain born wrong. Lol. I got straight from the get-go that he's just going to get more and more wrong, too (Wronger? Nah. Messed up. Definitely.) I loved the whole little conversation about virginity and Lucas clearly meaning something other than what Lex was thinking.

And then the whole yummy Bruce/Lex fun. Okay. back to reading more. ;)
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ooh, nice rewrite of "Jitters."
Brave Lex. *swoons at him*
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OH man. Clark and Lucas? That almost makes sense, but Lucas is just so twisted...
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And of course, Lex gets the blame for the twistedness. Gee, 'dad', where's the therapists if you thought things were so bad? :)lol! I am arguing with your characters. :):) that is good!

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Bruce speaks such truth: "I think that separating yourself from Lucas is going to be more difficult than you expect." Oh, the pain of that understatement.

Yay to the Brex! *sighs happily* And yay that he's coming back to the Castle. Not that it will help, I am sure, but I could be wrong! Mistaken! (I hope.)
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WAH!"Clark couldn't shake the feeling that he'd lost something*...." oh owie, owie.
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Grrrrr. Manipulative Lucas! Bad, bad to hurt my boy Clark! But YAY to Bruce getting a clue about Clark. Hmn, if Lex+Bruce=Brex, what is Clark+Bruce? Cluse? Brark? LOL!!

(mutters something about putting crazy-Lucas in a pit. And keeping him there forEVer.).

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Loved this SO much: "Oh. Lex." Clark didn't know what to say, or how to act. He hadn't seen Lex since that embarrassing, and that was way too mild a word, incident at the castle. He grinned weakly at him. "I-I didn't expect to see you."ever again in this life."

Hope rises anew!


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