WHAT!!! Okay, just go back and read the Clex sex scene you wrote in the first Ripley for inspiration. And that wasn't schmoopy!
"Fuck--you're--you're so hot--my dick--fuck...fuck, fuck..." Lex gripped his shoulders hard enough to bruise, Clark could feel his fingers grinding against bone, he could feel his cock burning in and out of him...he was in heaven. Lex moaned and ground his teeth into his shoulder--it was amazing, wonderful, to feel all the tiny things he was never able to feel before, shades of sensation that he'd always been deprived of...it was like a gift, to feel these little pains...Lex bit down and Clark shuddered. He felt orgasm rising up, almost in slow motion. His knees wobbled and Lex grabbed his hips, hard, thrust in harder and harder until the slap of flesh against wet flesh was all Clark heard, he was drifting, wrapped up in his pleasure....
Lex brought him back, hissed in his ear, "Who else fucked you Clark--who else?" and he twisted a tender nipple viciously.
Clark yelped and groaned--"Just you," he gasped, "Only you--"
Remember, just because two people have a kid doesn't mean they have to turn into the Cleavers! These guys aren't going to light candles and play Enya--they're going to crash into each other! I expect Lex to bring the same energy to the sex that he brought to throwing his briefcase around. *nods firmly* You can do it!
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8/23/06 04:48 am (UTC)"Fuck--you're--you're so hot--my dick--fuck...fuck, fuck..." Lex gripped his shoulders hard enough to bruise, Clark could feel his fingers grinding against bone, he could feel his cock burning in and out of him...he was in heaven. Lex moaned and ground his teeth into his shoulder--it was amazing, wonderful, to feel all the tiny things he was never able to feel before, shades of sensation that he'd always been deprived of...it was like a gift, to feel these little pains...Lex bit down and Clark shuddered. He felt orgasm rising up, almost in slow motion. His knees wobbled and Lex grabbed his hips, hard, thrust in harder and harder until the slap of flesh against wet flesh was all Clark heard, he was drifting, wrapped up in his pleasure....
Lex brought him back, hissed in his ear, "Who else fucked you Clark--who else?" and he twisted a tender nipple viciously.
Clark yelped and groaned--"Just you," he gasped, "Only you--"
Remember, just because two people have a kid doesn't mean they have to turn into the Cleavers! These guys aren't going to light candles and play Enya--they're going to crash into each other! I expect Lex to bring the same energy to the sex that he brought to throwing his briefcase around. *nods firmly* You can do it!
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8/23/06 12:54 pm (UTC)You're right...I never thought about it that way. I'm an idiot! *smacks forehead*
thank you beloved! *HUGHUG*
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8/23/06 01:32 pm (UTC)