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4/16/06 12:52 am
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Thanks to you, I finally got off my hindparts and posted Firebird to SSA. Only two years after I wrote the sucker! Woo-hoo! Go me!

For those of you who want to read it again--here it is! If you haven't read it before, it's BDSM, rape, murder, torture, and a love story. Tchah! you know what an old softie I am!

Firebird And The Grey Wolf

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4/16/06 07:16 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] norwich36.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. wow wow wow wow wow. That was amazing, and intense, and I loved it. Kirill was so *feral*, such an amazing little savage, and Alexei was so damn scary, and yet they were so perfect for each other! And they way they basically adopt Ivan at the end is sweet, in a scary twisted BDSM kind of way.

And boy, you did a fantastic job depicting Boris' evil, because by the end I actually wanted Kirill to torture him *more,* and that scene was already pretty gruesome.

I loved the way Alexei tamed Kirill (sort of), starting with that opening scene where he makes him strip and then just clean his boots (damn!), but I also loved the ways Alexei is drawn against his will to Kirill--especially that scene right after he has loaned him to Felix.

I love the fearlessness of your writing--I've seen a lot of scenarios and AUs where Clark and/or Lex are twisted or evil, but they tend to pull their punches so as not to alienate the reader. I love the way you just follow them down their logical path, ending with the incineration of the whole village.

And I have to say, my favorite bit in the whole story was this part: "A house in Saint Petersburg." jab "you deserve to die" jab "for being so stupid" jab "If you'd shown my boy a minute of love" jab "a single kind word"-- and he ground his finger down into the wound as Boris screamed like a dying rabbit--"you'd have all of Russia now." He stood and watched Boris' chest heave frantically as he fought not to pass out.

"Instead you get to contemplate how nasty your last few hours on this earth are going to be. I've come to reclaim what's mine Voronkov. I don't like that you've been playing with it."


That was such an amazing, satisfying story. I loved it.

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4/17/06 02:10 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Thank you a million times, thank you. I feel as if I could never be that free again writing them, it was an experience, to say the least. I'm so glad you enjoyed it--I enjoyed writing it, in a weird kind of way. *g*
(this fic is why i have my face of evil icon. ;))