fic post (repost) The Dog

[roxy]

cover by betrue
Written for the Smallville Big Bang Challenge

Title:The Dog
Fandom: SV
Pairing:Clark/Lex
Rating:nc-17
Warning: bdsm, rape, incest, non-con, underage--you know, Roxyland

Comments

[frelling-tralk.livejournal.com]

Oh yay *sits down to read it again*

[nerodi.livejournal.com]

ooooh love the warnings!!! I hope to read this in the near future (unfortunately not tonight b/c i need to go to sleep). I've been trying to catch up on your fic-- i read your pirate ship one the other day and, naturally, LOVED IT.

[myownghost.livejournal.com]

that's harsh and violent and frightening, and i read every word. (i'm kind of a wuss, too.) it amazed me that you were able to reach an almost-happy ending. poor dog. glad he has his lex!

I OBJECT!

[ender24]

I strongly disagree on your summary over at SSA!!!
*throws a fit!*
It's not a pleasant or uplifting story, there's no moral, no lesson, and no happy ending.

how can ,..err. no... how dare you to say that?!?!
beauty or pleasantry, or uplifting is in the eye of the beholder!!

there is a moral, a lesson, and even a happy ending!
clex is together = happy ending
everyone can turn anyone into anything = the lesson
we are all dogs = moral!

other than that, you are still the only person, i will ever allow to *dips* me *g*

[theclexfactor.livejournal.com]

Did I tell you how completely amazing this story was? It seriously blew me away and this is SO NOT my kind of story. But, in a way I have a thing for sociopath!Clark, and from the way you set up every bit of how he came to that point, it was a totally believeable characterization. Even the Lionark stuff didn't squick me (although it was very VERY disturbing) enough to make me stop reading. And trust me, Lionark (that isn't non-con) is one of those DIRTYWRONG things that make me not read a fic, and you brought it together. I..seriously want to print it out and bind it and put it on my bookshelf.

[redteekal.livejournal.com]

I'm not sure what to say about this story. I never saw Jet Li's Unleashed because animal abuse is one thing that reduces me to tears rapidly. I think I kept reading this because I needed to know that it didn't end with Clark staying like that, living his life as Lionel's dog. It did feel like trying to swallow bitter medicine at times. The scene when Lionel comes back from Japan was the most disturbing/abhorrent for me in terms of my reaction. I have an enduring admiration for people who can write in such prose that it stirs up such heavy emotional responses. Even if I hate the feeling the writing generates I always appreciate the ability to write for it. I think I better go and read something light and fluffy now to wash off the lingering sense of dirt. But thanks for writing this...I bet it wasn't easy at times.

[aloneindarknes7.livejournal.com]

I have to start off by kissing your virtual hand while I'm on my knees because that story was one of the most amazing, disturbed, and oh so wonderful fic I've read! You are such a talented writer and I am simply baffled by how much I enjoyed this fic. I saw the movie once, I remembered that I stayed up late to finish it and simply fell in love with it, but I forgot about it until I stumbled across this fic. Now I'm going to go out and buy it! But this fic brought that movie and that idea to a new level! Bravo!

[helioshyperion.livejournal.com]

Another fic down on catching up with your stuff. This was intense and amazing. I was really uncomfortable at times, but the plot is very well executed, and I'm glad that Lex was able to take control and help Clark. Thanks for sharing.

[epeters.livejournal.com]

I conquered this one over the weekend. You are such an amazing and talented writer. I'm in awe.

I really liked the story; it was so well thought out and plotted. The beginning; Clark as a young boy being taken was so sad. The fight scenes were very dramatic and very vivid and of course, the Clex was great!

One thing; why didn't Clark reconcile with his parents in the end?

[epeters.livejournal.com]

Yes. That makes sense. It's unrealistic to think that he would just fall into their arms and "be home". You're right.
I guess in my imaginary Part 2-he works at re-builing a relationship with his parents. :)

hello from russian fans of your Dog :)

[dolka-v.livejournal.com]

I finished translating The Dog. It’s fuckin' amazing... impressive... heart-breaking. It makes me cry and laugh, love and hate. Your fanfic is the best one among others about Clex. Thanks a lot from Russian Fandom. And look, this is a cover, made by one of Dog’s fan.

http://s55.radikal.ru/i148/1102/12/1425b1064a81.jpg

Cool, isn’t it?

P.S. Don’t you mind if I continue translating Unleashed? :)