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Thank you so much, [livejournal.com profile] digitalwave for the cool pic!

So, here it is the end! I finished it! Yay for me! Thank you, beloved ones for putting up with the endless whining (it is how you know it's me, right? *g*)

Here is it, part 56, the very last part of Brothers And Heroes.
THe Previous Parts are here, breathing a sigh of relief--they were almost out of lube!



It was a cool Sunday morning, and Lex was sitting on the porch of the yellow farmhouse. He was barefoot, in jeans, with a mug cradled in his hands, watching the sun peek over the horizon. It was the start of a brand new day, and he was completely comfortable. He couldn’t even imagine a time when he rather have died than to be seen outside of his home dressed down like this--nearly undressed, he grinned. He tipped the mug up and caught sight of one of the barn cats, glaring at him from the edge of the drive. He snorted. “You’ll have to work harder than that,” he smirked.” I learned to ignore a look like that, long ago.” He was mildly surprised that for a moment, he missed the late Lionel Luthor….
He gulped hot tea…just for a moment.

High above the planet, unseen and unmarked, the station floated, waiting to be brought completely to life. Lex had been granted the honor of being first aboard, he’d be there to greet the League as they arrived.

The sun began to warm the air; and he sat back, enjoyed the flavor of the tea, the feel of the slightly damp porch post against his back. This was his home, and even though he looked forward with great excitement to the coming journey, he’d be back to it. He could never leave it again, not permanently. He was almost grateful to Bruce for making him come here.

He missed Bruce sometimes…times like this when the past seemed as real and warm as this moment and it seemed he only had to turn the corner to see those boys running across the yard--Spooky, Casper, Clark--carefree, and full of life, hope, so certain that the future would be their every dream come true. The Bruce he missed lived in that past, that loving, full of joy, almost too generous boy he’d fallen in love with lived there too. He laughed a little at himself, at the maudlin turn his thoughts had taken. He was nothing like that boy he’d been then, and that might not necessarily be a bad thing. You couldn’t move through life and not change. It was an immutable law of the Universe. Everything changed, and change was good--certainly compared to the alternative, he thought, with a wry smile.

He got to his feet, a little stiffly, feeling a fleeting moment of nostalgia for young and limber muscles, and stretched. The sun was nearly over the barn, and he had to shower and pack and Clark was going to be there soon--God knew how he hated to wait. And he had to remember to eat, or Clark would be tiresome and lecture him about nutrition, and taking care of himself and so on and so on…He rolled his eyes. If he lived with Clark everyday, he’d be as big as a house. He snorted. He had the feeling Clark wouldn’t mind it at all.

He walked through the house and back to the kitchen. He stopped and the odd fit of nostalgia that plagued him this morning flooded his memories again. Martha’s kitchen hadn’t changed that much through the years, Clark had never wanted to change anything about his mother’s kitchen—it’d been quite a battle to get him to agree to the few improvements he did make. Lex shook his head ruefully. Thank God they were out in the country….

He rinsed his mug and put it in the sink, and made toast. He double checked the kitchen and chewed away at the toast--the things he had to do to keep the man happy. He reminded himself to leave a message with the housekeeper, checked the list he planned to leave on the table. Clark was going to laugh at that but it was better to be crystal clear and avoid mistakes then to assume someone knew exactly what you expected of them.

He went into the office that long ago had been Martha’s and sent Ashley an e-mail, again with notes and lists—she was more than capable of running the business while he was gone. Lex sighed. He did miss Sheila. He hoped sincerely that she enjoyed retirement. She’d been one hell of a tough lady, but a pleasure to work with.

He showered and changed: a pair of dark gray trousers soft as silk, a cashmere sweater because Clark loved the feeling of it under his hands, pale lilac because Clark liked the way it made his eyes look bluer, or so he claimed…he went through the house one more time, closing the window in his bedroom, making sure anything personal was locked safely away. In the back of the closet, there was a safe, and inside the safe, his most personal items were stored. Photographs of the kid he’d been, journals, letters, cards…letters from Clark. He rubbed at a spot between his eyes and thought he really should let Clark burn all that stuff. It meant nothing to anyone but him anymore, those children were long dead. He opened the closet door and ran his fingertips gently over the concealed panel. Again, as always, he decided against it. An illogical part of his mind whispered as long as the contents of the safe existed, than Vic and Harry and his pretty boy lived on. He straightened and grabbed his suitcase and smiled.

Time to pack.
******

Robin lay draped over the curve of the Daily Planet globe, arms and legs wide, humming to himself. His eyes were closed and he let the slow sweep ‘round of the globe soothe him. In a matter of a few hours, he’d be taking Lex to the completed station for the first time ever. He wouldn’t need the suit, or the breather or even the Velcro slippers—it was finally ready to live in, and he would be the first—just like he deserved. He stretched and threw one arm over his head, the other dropped to his chest and his hand came to rest over the R on his chest. He sighed quietly. It was past time for him to get back on patrol.


He threw his senses wide and scanned for trouble. It was fairly quiet, for once the citizens didn’t seem bent on murdering each other…which normally would make him nervous, but this wasn’t his city, not his regular patrol. He’d have plenty of time to sweep his own city too before it was time to come in.

He floated away from the Planet building and headed back at super speed to Gotham.
******
It was the end of his night and he was on the roof of the old police station, crouched in the shadows. Waiting for—

“Bruce.”

“…Robin.”

Clark heard the reproof in the gently spoken word. Clark wasn’t fooled by the tone, the quieter the voice, the greater the anger. Soft footsteps that barely displaced the gravel came toward him. He heard the faint stir of the cape. “No one’s listening, Batman. *You* know that.”

“And I shouldn’t have to remind you Robin, that suited, we’re guardians-- it’s all we are.”

Clark’s hands tightened into fists, the green gauntlets flexing with a noise only he could hear. “Yeah. Okay. I’m leaving in the hour to pick up Lex.”

Batman nodded. I’ve already sent a signal squirt to the station, and checked the pod. I’m leaving shortly…” he hesitated. “If you’d like to…you can double-check the pod yourself.”

Clark leaned back on the rooftop, and smiled. “Oh I planned to. I wouldn’t put my lover in something I haven’t checked thoroughly myself.”

Batman turned abruptly and the cape lifted and swirled through the gravel around his feet before settling again. Calmly he said, “Of course. I’d expect no less.”

“Bruce…”

“*Robin*, I’ll talk to you on the station. I’ll need your help running tests on our defenses.”

“Oh? Will we be testing interior defenses also—maybe the security cameras? Oh, wait, that’s right—only you have access to the cameras….”

“I’d rather not argue, Robin.”

“Argue? Brother, I’m deeply shocked. We never argue. We agree on all that’s important—and all that’s important is the mission, right?”

Batman leaned out over the edge of the roof and looked down into the streets below. “In a way, yes.” He was quiet for a long moment and Clark came up behind him and laid a hand on his shoulder. He heard Bruce’s heart speed up a little before it settled into a steady rhythm, his breathing calm and even. Clark wondered if it hurt him to maintain that much control all the time. He smiled. “You know I love you, right?” he said, and squeezed his shoulder, rubbed a little and listened, smiling.

“The most important thing is the mission,” he answered, long after Clark left him there.

******

Hours later, Lex was stepping out of a pod, identical to the escape pods stationed around each ring of the space station, but this one was designed with Lex in mind, designed to be carried into space by Clark.

He grinned up at Clark’s worried face.

“I’m fine, it worked great—cramped a bit, I’d hate to have to spend more that a few hours in it.”

“Well, I plan for you never to have to find out what that’s like.” He kissed Lex’s face and hands and scanned him briefly while Lex waited patiently and with an air of sacrifice. “You done?” At Clark’s nod, he pulled the bags he’d stashed under the couch in the capsule out, and handed them to Clark. He cupped the back of his head, and leaned over to kiss his cheek. “Shall we?”
I******

They were in Lex’s cabin, and Lex couldn’t stop grinning. The last time he’d visited, there’d been no gravity, it had been only half powered up, so some levels had been open and some not and there’d been odd spots here and there without power…now it hummed with life, and nearly squeaked with the newness.

He stopped and shuddered. “This—this feels like an impossible dream. I feel—am I really here? Is this really happening?”

Clark was at his side in an instant, his hands gliding up and down his arms. “Lex, it’s really happening. Look.” He guided him gently to the full-length port set into the wall. “Look, see that?”

Lex could see the ball of blue above them. He put his fingers on the glass, expecting it to be cold but it was body temperature. Clark leaned closer and put his cheek against his. “It’s real.” He slid his fingers under the hem of Lex’s sweater, up ribs and touched his lips to the back of his neck. “Isn’t it beautiful?”

Lex sighed and nodded and Clark pushed his sweater up higher, bunched it under his arms and rocked against Lex. Clark’s hands were splayed over his chest, his head was bent into the crook of his neck.

“Lex.” He slid the sweater completely off, leaned away and Lex watched his reflection in the glass as Clark pulled off his own shirt. When he leaned back, the skin to skin contact made Lex groan.

“This never ever gets old for me.”

Clark chuckled and bit him gently, rocked against him, teased his nipples. Lex was getting hard; he could feel Clark pressing against him, hard and so hot. He squirmed when Clark’s big hand slipped into the waistband of his pants, trying to give him better access and it made Clark’s erection prod him, made them both gasp. Lex arched against him when his fingers slid over the tip of his dick and squeezed gently.

“Look, Lex, all this night…” Lex stared out into the endless might, and felt Clark slide his pants down, taking his briefs with them, felt Clark’s palms tracking heat down his thighs, making goose-bumps rise. Lex stepped out of a puddle of material on the floor---a chill raced down his back, he shivered and Clark was right there, smooth, hot, his hair stroking and tickling him. He snorted and pressed back hard, rotating his hips and Clark made a noise between a growl and a groan. “. Tease. Slut.”

“Me?” Lex laughed. “You’ve got me spread-eagled and naked against a window, I don’t care if anyone can see or not…wait…are the cameras off?”

Clark touched Lex’s dick, let it jump in his hand and his own dick jerked and Lex could feel pre-come drip on his back. Clark’s tongue rimmed the shell of his ear, then slowly slipped into and out in a rythym Lex’s body recognized as the same it moved to when Clark fucked him, and reacted as strongly. He couldn’t stop his hips from moving. Clark worked his way down Lex’s body, touching every point on the way, kissing his shoulders, biting along his spine, licking and sucking the small of his back, until Lex moaned out loud and leaned against the glass, bending at the waist and letting Clark hold his hips and then he was spreading him…one hot kiss right there and he spoke. “The cameras are never off…” another kiss and the tip of his tongue skated delicately over his hole and Lex’s fingers scrabbled uselessly against the smooth surface.

“What—never, but…Bruce scans the camera feed—unh!—doesn’t he?”

Clark didn’t answer, he nodded and bit gently down on tender flesh and Lex rose up on tiptoe and groaned “Oh, God!”

Clark spread him wider and licked wetly around and around the ring of muscle, pushing, pushing until it allowed him to slide his tongue in and Lex was nearly sobbing now, he loved when Clark did this, loved when he slid a finger, two, three, inside, loved being fucked, loved his dick in him….

“Fuck, Clark, Bruce is going to see—ah—“

Clark shrugged, and it did wonderful things to Lex. He leaned his forehead on the swell of his cheek and Lex knew he was watching his fingers slide in and out of him, moving them until he hit the right spot. Fireworks went off in his spine and he heard Clark say, “Doesn’t matter. I’m used to Bruce watching.”

Lex quivered from head to toe and Clark said, “I’m going to fuck you now—I’m warning you I probably won’t last long.”

“Just shut up and fuck me,” Lex moaned and Clark laughed. He slid in on one long stroke and groaned in Lex’s ear, his hot breath washed the side of his neck; Lex arched, thrust back and then his lust addled brain replayed what Clark said, ”--Used to it—what?”

“Don’t talk,” Clark groaned, “just fuck.”

Lex’s forehead hit the glass and Clark pulled out, a long burn out and a long, hot slide in, heat, burn push, over and over and Clark’s big hand sliding up and down on his dick, it ached so good…

Clark slid in deep and plastered himself against Lex, held him tight. Lex could feel Clark’s dick twitch inside of him, his hand tighten on him, moving faster, milking him.

“Lex…Lex…anything you want. Everything you want,” he panted in his ear, pulled out until only the head of his dick was trapped inside, and Lex whined and squirmed, desperate to have him back. “We’ll make the world safe—Bruce will do it for the people, for all the little boys like him—me, I’m doing it for you, and for Bruce...I love you so much…”

He slammed into Lex, jerked back. Lex cried out in surprise, and Clark slammed into him again. “When you want it, tell me.” He slammed in again and Lex howled.
“Tell me,” and Clark began fucking him hard, right at the very edge of his endurance, knowing exactly how much he could take and Lex made a noise that was one long howl. Clark grabbed his chin and said, “Look at your stars.” and Lex came against the glass with a scream.
******

Over the wash of the waves against the beach, Bruce could hear a steady slap-slap of water, coming from the rocks. He was pretty certain he was the only one on the Hotel’s private beach, but it did sound like feet splashing around in water to him. He went slithering over the rocks, and there was no one there, just water splashing and breaking in little wavelets against the rocks in the tidal pool. He looked up and down the beach, it stretched both ways as far as he could see, nothing but sand shimmering in the heat. It was quiet, save for the sound of the water. Except…he stopped, head tilted, to listen…he heard the sound of laughter, and set out for it, walking across the sand, the sound seemed to move farther away and he walked farther and the sound moved and he walked and walked and walked….

Fin

5-16-2006
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5/16/06 06:10 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] teot.livejournal.com
Yay! You finished it! Go you! Heh. I have a *lot* to catch up on. :-)

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5/16/06 03:51 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Yes, thank god...*thud*

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5/16/06 06:49 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] cyberwitch13666.livejournal.com
*sniff* poor Bruce, still, I'm so happy that the Clex worked out on the end, I love you Roxy, you rock! Thank You so much for writing this.

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5/16/06 03:47 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Thank you *so* much for reading it, and thank you so much for letting me know you liked it!

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5/16/06 08:44 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] winter-winds.livejournal.com
would you beat me if i said i wanted more??? lol... hmm maybe you should write an mpreg next they're always fun to read. I love your writing so chop chop with something else if i can have no more of this fic.

Loved this story!!! **cries silently as its the end**

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5/16/06 03:50 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
More? Oh god, no!

Believe me when I tell you, if I ever write an mpreg, it would be the most horrendus thing you'd ever read...damn. Hmmm...now I'm almost tempted, but after that Clark eating Lex thing, I better wait.

More stories are always coming at Story Time, don't worry, and thnak you so much for reading this one! :)

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5/16/06 12:23 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] supercaptain182.livejournal.com
It's finished?!Well, I'll be...Ms. Roxy, you've stunned me again with your awesomeness and your amazing ability to truly capture who Lex, Clark and Bruce are in any situation!

*hugs*

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5/16/06 03:52 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Finally finished! Thank you muchly, dear one!

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5/16/06 07:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] leixela.livejournal.com
Linked from sv_ledger. Just finished your wonderful story. Please excuse the rambling ahead.
This is awesome work! I really enjoyed it. What a delightful universe you've created! There are so many more little scenes possible. Any chance you'll be doing coda-ish snippets next?
Also loved your Vic and Harry. *cuddles them* And especially Lex. My favourite was the part about Lex and the postcards. The buildup and anticipation were excellent. And then the sucker punch when the move fell through... *weeps for Lex*
Damaged!Clark is intriguing but I'm still not sure what I feel about this version of Clark yet. So much darker... Really glad for the happy Clex though. I would have liked a happy ending for poor Bruce too but the contrasting resolution was a powerful end.
It's been a pleasure reading your work. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

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5/17/06 01:32 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that you felt moved to read and comment. I got very close to my OCs. *g* I'm so pleased that you liked them.

I'm also very pleased the postcard bit worked for you--it was hard to write. THanks again, you've made me very happy!

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5/16/06 08:15 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] herohunter.livejournal.com
My Lexy is happy, YAY!!
This was such a beautiful story, with the boys and so much happened!
I need to read it again!
Thank you for writing it darling heart, I'm glad Clark got to work!
:D

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5/17/06 01:34 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
*HUG* thanks to you, he got to work! *G*
I'm so happy you stayed with me on this!

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5/16/06 11:16 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Loved it. The changes the AUness of it made in each of their lives, Clark traveling with Bruce and the way it darkened him. Lex's hurt when they abandoned him, and the way they came back together.

Well done.

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5/17/06 01:36 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Thank you so very much! I'm so pleased you read it, and liked it. It was a rough journey--I think I'm going a little lighter next time!

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5/16/06 11:40 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] dawnybee.livejournal.com
::gives you bouquet of flowers and lotsa hugs and kisses::

Thank you for this great, epic wonderful story!! I loved it (even when it would break my heart). It's a fantastic ending.

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5/17/06 01:38 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
oooo! thank you *so* much! I'm so happy you liked it! it was killing me in spots, I tell ya...

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5/17/06 12:50 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] dana-aeryn.livejournal.com
Can't believe this is done. I've been reading it since the beginning and I really liked how you wrapped it up.

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5/17/06 01:39 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
I can't believe it's finished either. I feel like I've been writing it forever! It's done! I'm atill alive! Huzzah!!!

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5/17/06 02:22 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] lapetite-kiki.livejournal.com
Go you!

That was one unique journey!

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5/17/06 02:26 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Whew! thank you--it was exhausting! *G*

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5/17/06 07:22 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
Oh! Oh, it's over!
And space station!!
Wheeeeeee!
*bounce*
*did i miss a chapter? Hrmmm...*

But...but...Bruce!
*sniffle*
That's so sad...

But still!
Love!
*smooooch*

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5/18/06 12:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Hey, everything but the kitchen sink! *hugs carefully*

*kisskiss*

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6/2/06 03:45 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] kristiinthedark.livejournal.com
*blissful sigh* So wonderful. I think I've had my heart broken about a hundred times as I've read this, but in the end, so worth it.

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6/5/06 01:44 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kitkat3979.livejournal.com
Hiya, honey!

I haven't been around much for a little while, so I've just caught up on all the final chapters.

I'm so glad that you finished it, and that it ended well for Clark and Lex. Even though I'm saying that, I'm still a little melancholy that Lex couldn't have the Clark he fell in love with, that Clark was so damaged by the time he came home. And Bruce is just so broken, and I think he's beyond fixing.

Anyway, hon, this is a gorgeous, epic fic, and I enjoyed every single word of it.

Now I have to go and catch up on everything else you've posted while I've been away.

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6/5/06 02:36 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
HI! *HUGS!*
How wonderful to see you here! What a nice way to start my day!! *hughug*!
Thank you so much, lovey--it ended as happily as it could, poor boys!

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8/30/06 06:18 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] miche-connor.livejournal.com
First off, I am glad, actually that Bruce and Clark are broken. I kind of hinted at it before but really, it just shines that Lex is the one that was made stronger by all the pain in his life. Seems like Clark and Bruce learned to bury and conceal and not really deal with what has happened. Vengeance becomes all, indeed.

(Think I can see the fractures of Clark's soul in his eyes? Bet Lex does. Bet that's why he loves him so.)

Love that Lex is a true benefactor, not crippled and twisted. I know I said that but it really does please me. So often, he's the one that gets left behind, lost and alone, and he never deserves that. (Not that Clark and Bruce do, but they, at the very least, have one another.)

Again with the sex that makes me cry because it shows just how much they love each other. (Yay, Heinlein, too, I forgot last comment. Hee:)

Gosh I just loved this whole thing. I really really did. Thank you.

*gives you some Rat Bastard Root Beer*

(and many hugs:)





I love that it ends with Bruce at the Hotel. And the Beach. God, that made me bawl.

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1/18/07 12:56 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] myownghost.livejournal.com
>An illogical part of his mind whispered as long as the contents of the safe existed, than Vic and Harry and his pretty boy lived on.

oh, my heart. that's poetic and perfect, as is the end (a dream?), with bruce on the beach following the happy voices as they recede.

this was such a pleasure to read, very satisfying emotionally.

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1/18/07 01:03 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Oh goodness! you just made me cry! Thank you so much, what a wonderful thing to say!

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1/19/07 07:00 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rosy5000.livejournal.com
First of all, I'm so happy that Clark and Lex ended up together in the end and pretty happy.

Second, poor Bruce. His life was never quite right after his parents died, then the Kents. He just got so screwed up. :(

Third, that last paragraph made me cry and scoop Bruce up and cuddle and protect him.

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1/19/07 04:15 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for all your comments here. I feel kind of bad that this comment made me so happy--I wanted Bruce's dream to have an impact, to describe his life from that point forward. I'm so glad it worked.
*hughug*

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3/22/07 02:06 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] aldea16.livejournal.com
I have read the first few chapters of this story and am really loving it. However, I am having problems with live journal and accessing all the separate parts all over the place is giving me problems. Also there seems to be chapters missing. Or I am not finding them. Is there another site where this story is posted? Or could someone perhaps email it to me? I'd be so grateful.

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3/22/07 03:22 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Let me check into it, and i'll get back to you, sorry!

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4/23/07 08:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] morganichele.livejournal.com
Unbelievable. It is absolutely unbelievable how GOOD this story is. I applaud you. This story is full of emotion and power, and lots of heat. Just...amazing. My hat is off.

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5/19/07 04:39 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Wow--I'm so embarrassed! I never saw this commment---thank you so very much! What a really lovely thing to read! I may be late in responding but believe me, your comment had me floating!!

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5/19/07 02:09 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] hangebokhan.livejournal.com
Oh my god, this epic was just so fucked up... in a good way... but still... zounds it hurt. I really hope Mariposa hurts less... *heads over to read*

Loved it either way ^^

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5/19/07 04:44 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
oh dear...I'm not sure Mariposa is going to hurt less or not! Thanks so much for letting me know you read this story. I'm so pleased at your description--so fucked up is right on point! In fact, I'm re-reading it to clean it up for posting and whew...I'd forgotten how screwed up Clark is!

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Simply Complicated

2/22/08 06:52 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rednihilist.livejournal.com
I know this is a long time after you originally posted this, but I thought you'd still like to read a comment.

“You know I love you, right?” he said, and squeezed his shoulder, rubbed a little and listened, smiling.

“The most important thing is the mission,” he answered, long after Clark left him there.


Your Bruce killed me. And this:

Except…he stopped, head tilted, to listen…he heard the sound of laughter, and set out for it, walking across the sand, the sound seemed to move farther away and he walked farther and the sound moved and he walked and walked and walked….

In fact, you know I loved all of your amazing story, but it's always your Bruce that affects me the most. And I cried a lot while I read this story. I'm serious: A LOT. Even now, just quoting these parts back to you, tears are running down my face. You amaze me. You truly do.

Bruce is a difficult character to write, I've gathered, for a lot of people. But you did a great job of making him a person here, and not just a stereotype, or in any way one-dimensional. No one is all good or all bad. No one is always a hero, and even the villains aren't all evil. Bruce in this fic does things I hate, and he does incredibly selfless acts, as well. But no matter what, I always felt for him and found myself hoping he'd get a happy ending, but knowing he wouldn't. . . couldn't or he wouldn't be Bruce.

Thank you for writing this. Thank you for making Bruce, and making me love him. Thank you for inspiring me, and thank you for helping me write. . . you help me write more than you'll ever know. :)

Re: Simply Complicated

2/22/08 05:11 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
You've reduced me to a puddle of soggy Roxy.

I love writing--or I should say, I love telling a story. I'm happy when other people play along and read the stories. I'm always startled if someone says I influence them to write--it's a shock, but good one. If I'm helping you, than I'm amazed and very pleased because I think you're excellent!

I think that at times, I love Bruce best of all. He's good to write because he's a good person, with all these conflicting bits about him.

I know this is a long time after you originally posted this, but I thought you'd still like to read a comment.

Trust me on this--it's never to late to get feedback on a story, never! ;)

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7/2/08 11:56 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] theatervine.livejournal.com
I can't believe I read all of that in three days! Fantastic, and now I want a Bruce/Clark/Lex happy-ending, sequel. Well done, still so them and so hot.

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7/3/08 12:36 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Wow! You zipped through it!

I wrote a sort of tiny snippet of a sequel in comments one day, but it was just as sad as this ending. Man, this is really a sad ending...thanks so much for reading--and thanks for all your lovely comments!

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Posted by [identity profile] theatervine.livejournal.com - 7/3/08 12:48 am (UTC) - Expand

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5/19/09 05:19 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] peachesrluvly.livejournal.com
awwwww.... I'm so sad for Bruce... I was leaning towards an incestuous (but HOT) threesome between the three... *huggles* at least Lex is a bottom. Or arse. whichever makes more or less sense. So cuuuuuuuuuuuuuute...!!

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5/20/09 02:26 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading! Always a terrific surprise to get a comment on an older story!

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10/29/09 03:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] oliver95.livejournal.com
I always thought that I G Farben was the monolithic chemical company that made the cyanide gas for the concentration camps. It was split up after the war into smaller parts, one of them I know is BASF.

I loved the story, you even managed to make Victoria sympathetic battling with her vile parents. This is a Clark that is so secure he can deal with Lex and Bruce and yet not be a sanctimonious bully. I liked the shagging at the end knowing that the only viewer would be Bruce!

I know Whit is one of your favourites and he came out beautifully in this. In fact, apart from Edge and possibly Lana, you manage to make all the characters as complex as real life, even those which started out as bad, i.e. Harry, changed into a loving and loyal friend.

I'm still not half-way through danceswithgary's recs but won't go back to them till I'm up to date with your fic because I'm not that good navigating LJ. So, before I have a nap(!) I'll find more of your fic to enjoy when I resurface.

Many thanks

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11/1/09 05:41 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
I'm so sorry to take so long to respond! I don't know how I missed this!

Thank you so much for reading this--I'm happy you liked Victoria! I have this thing, I can rarely let the unsympathetic characters remain totally unsympathetic. I like there to be a reason they are what they are. I ended up really liking Victoria. She was mostly self-centered and raised by weasels, but she did try.

Whit--it's awful how much I love him and foist him onto my readers! He's in almost all my SV fics and I didn't even realize how much he showed up until I started tagging all my stuff, ha!

you mention Lana--true, I'm not really nice to her but in Boys Of Summer, I did write a sympathetic Lana, nd I'm pretty sure I only assassinated her character inn one story. :)

Thanks so much--it's fun getting comments on the old stuff--it reminds me of the fun I used to have with these guys!

Wow.....

8/10/10 08:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by (Anonymous)
Alright so again with posting comments way after these are written but anyways!! I really really liked this story. It left off with just enough angst to be Bruce. I was sad though.

So much changed and happened that it almost made me a little nostalgic over my own life. I kept flashing back to my memories of the past. So all in all it was great because it made me think and yeah.....

Teehee.....anyways you are a really gifted writer. I only wish I had found your fiction sooner.

~J~

Re: Wow.....

8/11/10 12:09 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
it almost made me a little nostalgic over my own life. I kept flashing back to my memories of the past. So all in all it was great because it made me think and yeah.....

wow...that's the most amazing thing anyone has said about a story of mine. Thank you so much! And thanks for your comments--if you check back, I want you to know that in this week of kind of crappy stuff, they made me feel so good! :)

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2/8/11 09:51 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] amcnh.livejournal.com
Oh boy! It took me two days, but I finished reading it. I kept looking at the scroll bar to figure out precisely how close to the end I was. I didn't want it to end.

I'm relatively new to the Bruce/Clark ship, but well...I am such a sucker for good writing. And I am a very picky reader. You drew me in from the start with this AU. How Lex and Bruce met. How you introduced Clark into the mix. When the Kent's took Bruce in and how he developed I was kind of puzzled into how he would become the Batman. You completely surprised me when I got to the chapter with Bruce running late to see them. I was just bee-bopping through the story. Then when you unveiled the crowd that was around the bank and Bruce coming up on it. I was like Oh no Roxy, no no no no NO! Don't do this to Bruce, he's happy. Oh God you did. *deep breath* I was completely floored with the transition of Clark after the Kent's passed. Wow. Poor Lex *wibble* during that dark time. I was so like, oh no, he's going to turn into a Lionel, but this story is supposed to have a BHE! *wibble* However, will Ms. Roxy do it?! Well you did it and while I am satisfied that Clex is happy for better or worse (and Lex is a sentimentalist) I feel for Bruce. I think that if he caught the Joker (I am right that it was the Joker that killed both the Wayne's and the Kent's correct in this AU?) that perhaps maybe (would pray) that he could let some light into his life. Huh? However I really don't think so. I can see the acrimonious relationship that Bruce and Clark have. Clark still loves him.
Thanks so much for writing this I greatly appreciate it. Job well done. I will have to peruse more of your writing :)

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2/8/11 11:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
I just walked in from work to find this waiting for me, and it just lit up my whole day! Thanks so much for your kind words about my story!

I hated to kill the Kents--it really did break my heart because I got so fond of them. But you know it needed to be a huge blow to get Bruce to become Batman. And you're right, it was the Joker both times--destiny, right?

And Clark definitely loves Bruce even if they'll never be what they once were to each other. I'm still sorry about messing Bruce up like that....

I'm so pleased that you liked the story! Thank you a million times for reading this, and thank you for leaving so lovely a comment!
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